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The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004. summarise the information below and make comparison where relevant. v.1

The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004.
Uniform is a symbol of professionalism. There are few companies who believe that their employees must wear uniforms while they are on duty. Wearing uniforms has benefits as well are drawbacks. This essay will cover the pros and cons of wearing uniforms for employees at work place. Firstly, employees wearing uniform know what they wear while working. For example, for Civil service officers such as Navy, Army and Police it is mandatory to wear their official dress code while they are at work. Secondly, it saves a copious amount of time in deciding what to wear to work. Thirdly, uniforms, carry a brand value of the individual representing the Company. For example, when we see a police force officer, we know the duties of the police officers and it creates a positive impact since they are the protectors of the citizens. On the other hand, there are drawbacks to wearing uniforms as well. Firstly, uniform, although it creates a positive image of the individual, but that necessarily does not change the person’s personality. For example, if a person is a con artist, he can dress like an army or police officer and still carry on with the robbery which he is capable of. Secondly, uniform is expensive since there is a requisite to stitch and print the company details on it. But if there is no uniform, then the cost of clothing is borne by the employee. Employees prefer not to wear uniform, but formal wear is accepted since they still have a choice to a certain extent. In conclusion, Uniform does not have any benefit for the employee as the level of work to be performed is the same. If employees wear uniform, they also carry the image of the company. With one negative act, the whole image of the company is at stake. Therefore, uniform can increase responsibility and employees will always be reluctant in wearing one.
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Uniform
is a symbol of professionalism. There are few
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companies
who believe that their
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employees
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must
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wear
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uniforms
while they are on duty. Wearing
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uniforms
has benefits
as well
are drawbacks. This essay will cover the pros and cons of wearing
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uniforms
for
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employees
at
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work
place.

Firstly
,
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employees
wearing
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uniform
know what they
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wear
while working.
For example
, for Civil service
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officers
such as Navy, Army and
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Police
it is mandatory to
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wear
their official dress code while they are at
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work
.
Secondly
, it saves a copious amount of time in deciding what to
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wear
to
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work
.
Thirdly
,
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uniforms
, carry a brand value of the individual representing the
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Company
.
For example
, when we
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see
a
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police
force
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officer
, we know the duties of the
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police
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officers
and it creates a
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positive
impact since they are the protectors of the citizens.

On the other hand
, there are drawbacks to wearing
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uniforms
as well
.
Firstly
,
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uniform
, although it creates a
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positive
image of the individual,
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but
that
necessarily
does not
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change
the person’s personality.
For example
, if a person is a con artist, he can dress like an army or
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police
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officer
and
still
carry on with the robbery which he is capable of.
Secondly
,
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uniform
is expensive since there is a requisite to stitch and print the
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company
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details
on it.
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But
if there is no
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uniform
, then the cost of clothing
is borne
by the
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employee
.
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Employees
prefer not to
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wear
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uniform
,
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but
formal
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wear
is
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accepted
since they
still
have a choice to a certain extent.

In conclusion
,
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Uniform
does not have any benefit for the
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employee
as the level of
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work
to
be performed
is the same. If
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employees
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wear
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uniform
, they
also
carry the image of the
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company
. With one
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negative
act, the whole image of the
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company
is at stake.
Therefore
,
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uniform
can increase responsibility and
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employees
will always be reluctant in wearing one.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The table below gives information related to population growth, average birth per woman, life expectancy at birth in countries with different income levels in 2000 and 2004.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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