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The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 198o and 2002. Summarise information and make comparison which relevant. v.1

The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 198o and 2002.
The internet allowed people to remotely access, free and paid, contents and information, from different types of devices, as computers or smartphones, from anywhere. This essay will talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this topic. One of the features of the internet is that users can share information among themselves, this practice allows users to have access to completely free knowledge, and this has many benefits. The first benefits is that people from any financial state can learn about almost everything, for example, a person wants to learn programming, but does not have money to buy books or pay a course, instead, this individual can look for blogs, communities or videos to learn how to program. Another benefit, is being able to learn remotely, from anywhere, at any time, because it is easier for people with occupied schedules, for instance, a student that is studying and working at the same time, wants to learn about how computer, even having a tight schedule, he can learn it when he has some free time. However, there are some drawbacks. The ability users have of putting any information online for others to access it has some issues. One issue is the spread of lies and misinformation, for example, a certain website makes a page about how to fix a computer, but the page information is wrong, maybe intentionally, this can make many users who visit this page, in hope to fix a computer, to break it even more. Another issue is the access to any content, without any restriction, an instance where this is a problem, is when children have access to pornography. In conclusion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of free, remote access to any knowledge of the web. Advantages as free and remote learning. Nevertheless, there are also disadvantages as the spread of false information and unrestricted access to any content from anyone.
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free
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information
, from
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different
types of devices, as computers or smartphones, from anywhere. This essay will talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this topic.

One of the features of the internet is that
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users
can share
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information
among themselves, this practice
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allows
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users
to have
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access
to completely
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knowledge, and this has
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many
benefits. The
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benefits is that
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people
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learn
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learn
programming,
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but
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books or pay a course,
instead
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learn
how to program. Another benefit, is being able to
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learn
remotely
, from anywhere, at any time,
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because
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people
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for instance
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learn
about how computer, even having a tight schedule, he can
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drawbacks. The ability
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users
have of putting any
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information
online for others to
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access
it has
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some
issues. One issue is the spread of lies and misinformation,
for example
, a certain website
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makes
a page about how to
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fix
a computer,
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the page
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is
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make
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many
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users
who visit this page, in hope to
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fix
a computer, to break it even more. Another issue is the
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access
to any content, without any restriction, an instance where this is a problem, is when children have
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access
to pornography.

In conclusion
, there are both advantages and disadvantages of
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free
, remote
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access
to any knowledge of the web. Advantages as
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free
and remote learning.
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also
disadvantages as the spread of false
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information
and unrestricted
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access
to any content from anyone.
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IELTS essay The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 198o and 2002.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
314 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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