the students are discussing woman's summer plans. describe problem she states. which solution will you prefer and why? v.1
the students are discussing woman's summer plans. describe problem she states. which solution will you prefer and why? v. 1
The phenomena of tourism, becoming international, has taken a lot of big advantages to many places. But, in the while, it has impacted not only on local inhabitants, but also on the environment. It is my opinion that in any case advantages can be considered more than the disadvantages, depending on how "intelligent" the tourism is.
The main concern about people is pollution. Not only related to the carbon dioxide emissions of planes, but also referred to the behaviour that visitors have when they are in a place they don't call home. Archaeological sites, beaches, forests, seashores, they all have something in common. In each of these places it is possible to find trash like cans, plastic bottles, plastic bags and a lot of other items, dangerous both for the animals and the environment.
Therefore, I think that there is a solution, it exists a way to limit disadvantages and maybe transforming them into advantages. For example tourists can choose another vehicle, less polluting than a plane, like the train, or they can organise themselves in groups travelling all together by bus, reducing the fuel consumes. To avoid people throwing away dangerous items in the environment could be useful working on the sensitization of the tourists, making information directly on the site.
To sum up, the amount of advantages or disadvantages related to international tourism, depends mainly on the ability of people to understand how their behaviours could change the dynamics of the place they are visiting. It will be enough to pay more attention on small choices to raise everyone benefits.
The phenomena of tourism, becoming international,
has
taken
a lot of
big
advantages
to
many
places
.
But
, in the while, it has impacted not
only
on local inhabitants,
but
also
on the environment. It is my opinion that in any case
advantages
can
be considered
more than the disadvantages, depending on how
"
intelligent
"
the tourism is.
The main concern about
people
is
pollution. Not
only
related to the carbon dioxide emissions of
planes
,
but
also
referred to the
behaviour
that visitors have when they are in a
place
they don't call home. Archaeological sites, beaches, forests, seashores, they all have something in common. In each of these
places
it is possible to find trash like cans, plastic bottles, plastic bags and
a lot of
other items,
dangerous
both for the animals and the environment.
Therefore
, I
think
that there is a solution, it exists a way to limit disadvantages and maybe transforming them into
advantages
.
For example
tourists can choose another vehicle, less polluting than a
plane
, like the train, or they can
organise
themselves in groups travelling all together by bus, reducing the fuel consumes. To avoid
people
throwing away
dangerous
items in the environment could be useful working on the sensitization of the tourists, making information
directly
on the site.
To sum up, the amount of
advantages
or disadvantages related to international tourism, depends
mainly
on the ability of
people
to understand how their
behaviours
could
change
the dynamics of the
place
they are visiting. It will be
enough
to pay more attention on
small
choices to raise everyone benefits.
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