The school in your hometown is going to provide students after-class activities. What is your suggestion? v.1
The school in your hometown is going to provide students after-class activities. What is your suggestion? v. 1
The world has seen many wars, from the world war one and to the Russian missile crisis. Both men and females have equally suffered from the horrors of these wars. Some believe that women should not have any restrictions to be employed by the tri-forces. I completely agree with this argument, as I believe both genders should contribute to the betterment of the future and also, women have an essential natural ability.
Everyone must be given a chance to sustain world peace. It would be a waste of resources if women were left out from any defence positions, as they can also contribute to an organisation and be equivalent to men. For example, we have seen many female pilots on commercial airlines when we travel. Therefore, a female air force pilot also carries attributes that men have and live up to a task just as well as a male fighter pilot.
On the other hand, critics who argue that only men should be given ranks within the defence industry say that, men have more physical strength and more masculine attributes in the front lines. While, I agree with this argument I also think that feminine attributes are also required within the industry. For instance, currently throughout the world, more and more of female healthcare professionals such as doctors or nurses are being employed each year. Even though, there is no scientific reason or a logical explanation to this, many believe that females have a born natural healing power that men do not carry. Hence, it is imperative that women are given the opportunity to heal injured soldiers.
In conclusion, it would be wasteful if one gender is left out therefore, both men and women must be given the equal opportunities in the defence forces. In addition, females are born with healing powers that men do not carry.
The
world
has
seen
many
wars, from the
world
war one and to the Russian missile crisis. Both
men
and
females
have
equally
suffered from the horrors of these wars.
Some
believe that
women
should not have any restrictions to
be employed
by the
tri-forces
. I completely
agree
with this argument, as I believe both genders should contribute to the betterment of the future and
also
,
women
have an essential natural ability.
Everyone
must
be
given
a chance to sustain
world
peace. It would be a waste of resources if
women
were
left
out from any
defence
positions, as they can
also
contribute to an
organisation
and be equivalent to
men
.
For example
, we have
seen
many
female
pilots on commercial airlines when we travel.
Therefore
, a
female
air force pilot
also
carries attributes that
men
have and
live
up to a task
just
as well
as a male fighter pilot.
On the other hand
, critics who argue that
only
men
should be
given
ranks within the
defence
industry say that,
men
have more physical strength and more masculine attributes in the front lines.
While
, I
agree
with this argument I
also
think
that feminine attributes are
also
required within the industry.
For instance
,
currently
throughout the
world
, more and more of
female
healthcare professionals such as doctors or nurses are
being employed
each year.
Even though
, there is no scientific reason or a logical explanation to this,
many
believe that
females
have a born natural healing power that
men
do not carry.
Hence
, it is imperative that
women
are
given
the opportunity to heal injured soldiers.
In conclusion
, it would be wasteful if one gender is
left
out
therefore
, both
men
and
women
must
be
given
the equal opportunities in the
defence
forces.
In addition
,
females
are born
with healing powers that
men
do not carry.
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