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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. v.3

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The maps below illustrate the placement of a university’s sports center now, and how it will look after rebuilding. Overall, we can see at present the university sports center map that they haven’t a leisure pool, that they will build in future plans. In contrast, to the present map, future maps will expand their territory. On the one hand, to the west of the pool, we can see the changing rooms. Opposite to the changing room, we might see seating. To the south of the reception, we must look at the entrance. To the west and east of the sports center, we might see outdoor courts. On the hand, according to the plan, the sports center will extend its territory. In contrast to the present plan, they will demolish outdoor courts, and to the east of seating, they will construct sports hall. Besides, to the west of changing they will erect leisure pool. To the north-east of the sports hall, they will add two dance studios. To the south of dance studios, they will introduce another changing room, and with changing room they will construct a café. To the southeast of the leisure pool, they will build a third changing rooms with sports shops.
The
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maps
below illustrate the placement of a university’s
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sports
center
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now
, and how it will look after rebuilding.

Overall
, we can
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see
at present the university
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sports
center
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map
that they haven’t a leisure
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pool
, that they will build in future plans.
In contrast
, to the present
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map
, future
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maps
will expand their territory.

On the one hand, to the west of the
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pool
, we can
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see
the
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changing
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rooms
. Opposite to the
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changing
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room
, we might
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see
seating. To the south of the reception, we
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must
look at the entrance. To the west and east of the
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sports
center, we might
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see
outdoor courts.

On the hand, according to the plan, the
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sports
center will extend its territory.
In contrast
to the present plan, they will demolish outdoor courts, and to the east of seating, they will construct
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sports
hall.
Besides
, to the west of
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changing
they will erect leisure
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pool
. To the north-east of the
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sports
hall, they will
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add
two dance studios. To the south of dance studios, they will introduce another
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changing
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room
, and with
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changing
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room
they will construct a café.
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To
the southeast of the leisure
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pool
, they will build a third
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changing
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rooms
with
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sports
shops.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
204 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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