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The plan below show the public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summaries the main information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible. v.1

The plan below show the public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summaries the main information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible. v. 1
Undoubtedly, recently, the phenomenon of saying the fact and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. I fully agree with this fact that although lie in some circumstances would be preferred, people have to tell the truth in all different and difficult situations in their lives. In turn, this essay will discuss the reasons behind this fact. On the one hand, being honest can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the facts that the merits of public confidence as well as reliable people, are inextricably bound up. That is to say that humans must tell the truth and needs to hear the realities, which cause people to improve self-confidence and be converted to a happy person, thus individuals are not able to live with fake facts for a long time (quotes from psychiatrists). For instance, in a study at Harvard University, scientists proved that 35% of humans who lived by the truth in their youth, in the older age were considered as a person satisfied with their lives. On the other hand, telling the truth might decrease the consequences of unwanted events in life. Some people declare that lie brings the lie. Hence, realities must be taken into account in all stages of people’s life. As a tangible example, not telling global warming fact to the people caused the increased consumption of fossil fuels by people affected temperature to enhance about 2 degrees of centigrade in 2019. To summarize, some people are of the opinion that telling the truth must be honoured in some situations, while others are opposed to this view. I am sure that reality has to be always said even in hard conditions.
Undoubtedly
, recently, the phenomenon of saying the
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fact
and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. I
fully
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agree
with this
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fact
that although lie in
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some
circumstances would
be preferred
,
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people
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have to
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tell
the
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truth
in all
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different
and difficult situations in their
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lives
. In turn, this essay will discuss the reasons behind this fact.

On the one hand, being honest can provide the society with
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some
noticeable effects which
are rooted
in the facts that the merits of public confidence
as well
as reliable
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people
, are
inextricably
bound up.
That is
to say that humans
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must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
the
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truth
and needs to hear the realities, which cause
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people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
self-confidence and
be converted
to a happy person,
thus
individuals are not able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with fake facts for a long time (quotes from psychiatrists).
For instance
, in a study at Harvard University, scientists proved that 35% of humans who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
by the
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truth
in their youth, in the older age
were considered
as a person satisfied with their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
.

On the other hand
, telling the
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truth
might decrease the consequences of unwanted
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events
in life.
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Some
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people
declare that lie brings the lie.
Hence
, realities
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must
be taken
into account in all stages of
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people’s
life. As a tangible example, not telling global warming
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fact
to the
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people
caused the increased consumption of fossil fuels by
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people
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affected
temperature to enhance about 2 degrees of centigrade in 2019.

To summarize
,
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some
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people
are of the opinion that telling the
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truth
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must
be
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honoured
in
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some
situations, while others
are opposed
to this view. I am sure that reality
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has to
be always said even in
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hard
conditions.
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IELTS essay The plan below show the public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summaries the main information by reporting main features and make comparison where possible. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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