The educational system is gradually improved thanks to the support from the technological devices, especially the computers. although it is argued that this is a part of the evolution, some others state this is the cause of many negative effects such as addiction, being isolated or increasing crime rate. In my view, everything existing in the world all have their two-side effect, advantages and disadvantages.
To begin with the positive side of this, no one can refuse many benefits that the computers bring as this connect people in the globe and boost up the productivity of many organizations. In order to illustrate this point, the computers have taken over the role of accounting, calculating or even doing research for students. In the past, when the engineers wanted to analyse the internal forces happening in each structure, they had to use limited formulas which sometimes have big tolerance. However, by using computers to calculate many complex functions, now they are able to reduce the risks of the sustainable calculation.
On the other hand, the computers might contain many drawbacks effecting badly the humanity. One of the common opposite consequences is the addiction. In other words, due to the race of many entertainment enterprises, lots of video games supporting in computer platform has been presented, this result in children can be addicted by playing games with these kind of technical devices. Furthermore, this perhaps increases the rate of violent crime in each region because of the mature content and pornography attached in the video games which our children are approaching. The fatal massacre happening in Texas, for example, were held by a young man because he played too much violent games according to the local officers.
To summerise, the world would not be modern if the humanity did not apply computers to their daily life. This device improves our productivity, increases profit, saves time in complex calculation and connect people in a long distance. In contrast, this also causes obsession and violent behaviour in young people. However, I believe if we control the way our children interacting with this device, we can reduce its risks and encourage the humanity to be better.
The educational system is
gradually
improved
thanks to the support from the technological
devices
,
especially
the computers.
although
it
is argued
that this is a part of the evolution,
some
others state this is the cause of
many
negative
effects such as addiction,
being isolated
or increasing crime rate. In my view, everything existing in the world all have their two-side effect, advantages and disadvantages.
To
begin
with the
positive
side of this, no one can refuse
many
benefits that the computers bring as this connect
people
in the globe and boost up the productivity of
many
organizations. In order to illustrate this point, the computers have taken over the role of accounting, calculating or even doing research for students. In the past, when the engineers wanted to
analyse
the internal forces happening in each structure, they had to
use
limited formulas which
sometimes
have
big
tolerance.
However
, by using computers to calculate
many
complex functions,
now
they are able to
reduce
the
risks
of the sustainable calculation.
On the other hand
, the computers might contain
many
drawbacks effecting
badly
the humanity. One of the common opposite consequences is the addiction.
In other words
, due to the race of
many
entertainment enterprises, lots of video
games
supporting in computer platform has
been presented
, this result in children can
be addicted
by playing
games
with
these kind
of technical
devices
.
Furthermore
, this perhaps increases the rate of violent crime in each region
because
of the mature content and pornography attached in the video
games
which our children are approaching. The fatal massacre happening in Texas,
for example
,
were held
by a young
man
because
he played too much violent
games
according to the local officers.
To
summerise
, the world would not be modern if the humanity did not apply computers to their daily life. This
device
improves
our productivity, increases profit, saves time in complex calculation and connect
people
in a long distance.
In contrast
, this
also
causes obsession and violent
behaviour
in young
people
.
However
, I believe if we control the way our children interacting with this
device
, we can
reduce
its
risks
and encourage the humanity to be better.