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The performance of the staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to increase staff productivity? v.1

The performance of the staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to increase staff productivity? v. 1
Corporate entities exist to make profit and that can only be done with collective work from all the departments. The work of an employee can have a great impact on the growth of the organisation. Staff can be encouraged by providing rise in packages and also by improvings working conditions. To begin with, The employees in a company plays vital role. Employer can increase productivity by increasing their salaries. Employees are given fixed amount of pay for their daily task and they work limited hours without any addition input. If owner of the company want to extract more output. Then they should provide staff with an incentive, so that they can put an extra effort in addition to their routine daily work. For instance, Mc donald food chain in india use to sell 100 nos of Hamburger and staff were given fixed monthly wages. The management decided to provide addition bonus to the employees if they double the sales. This how both staff and the owner of the organisation where able to increase the employee productivity and revenue. Furthermore, In order to take more output from the workers of the company, the managers have provided staffs with good working environment. Employers removed the restriction of break and given freedom to employees to take regular gaps during the working hours in comparison to fixed two breaks during the day. The other move by the owner of the company was to provide financial assistance to the worker in times of needs. Every person have ups and down in their life and employees are paid certain amount regularly and in case of emergencies they do not have backup to tackle such situation. Hence employers understand the needs and give option to help in needy employees. For instance, ABC company employee were offered money assitance in case of un forseen condition and also flex working schedule as per they need made them motivated towards work and the performance of the company enhance drastically. In conclusion, Workers of the company can be motivated by providing an incentive on work and also by giving freedom to work as per convinece and also by assistance during emergency situation by giving financial loans.
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make
profit and that can
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only
be done
with collective
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work
from all the departments. The
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work
of an
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employee
can have a great impact on the growth of the
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organisation
.
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Staff
can
be encouraged
by providing rise in packages and
also
by
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improvings
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working
conditions.

To
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begin
with, The
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employees
in a
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company
plays vital role. Employer can increase productivity by increasing their salaries.
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Employees
are
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given
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fixed
amount of pay for their daily
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task and
they
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work
limited hours without any addition input.
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If
owner of the
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company
want to extract more output. Then they should provide
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staff
with an incentive,
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so
that they can put an extra effort
in addition
to their routine daily
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work
.
For instance
,
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Mc
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donald
food chain in
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india
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use to
sell 100 nos of Hamburger and
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staff
were
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given
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fixed
monthly wages. The management decided to provide addition bonus to the
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employees
if they double the sales. This how both
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staff
and the owner of the
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organisation
where able to increase the
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employee
productivity and revenue.

Furthermore
, In order to take more output from the workers of the
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company
, the managers have provided
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staffs
with
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good
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working
environment. Employers removed the restriction of break and
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given
freedom to
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employees
to take regular gaps during the
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working
hours
in comparison
to
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fixed
two breaks during the day. The other
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move
by the owner of the
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company
was to provide financial assistance to the worker in times of needs. Every person have ups and down in their life and
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employees
are paid
certain amount
regularly
and in case of emergencies they do not have backup to tackle such situation.
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Hence
employers understand the needs and give option to
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help
in needy
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employees
.
For instance
, ABC
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company
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employee
were offered
money
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assitance
in case of
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un
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forseen
condition and
also
flex
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working
schedule as per they need made them motivated towards
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work
and the performance of the
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company
enhance
drastically
.

In conclusion
, Workers of the
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company
can
be motivated
by providing an incentive on
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work
and
also
by giving freedom to
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work
as per
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convinece
and
also
by assistance during emergency situation by giving financial loans.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS essay The performance of the staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to increase staff productivity? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
365 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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