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The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. v. 1
Nowadays, people adopted such a way that consumed things and throw away even though it is very useful. It became a habit because of availability and its consumption, especially in the essential goods. To begin with, the manufacture units are far away from the city and it is a bad choice to deliver consumer products with recycled or decompose materials. The production cost of recycled items is very high. For example, 20mm micron non-usable item production cost is $2 but reusable product cost is $10. In General, people opt the low-cost items if it is similar quality and quantity of product. Also, the availability and reliability of the recycling things are very low in the market and it is not fulfilling the business needs on expected time. Consume and throw away culture has been introduced by various companies, especially in food items. On the other hand, these used products were dispatched to the garbage; there were a tremendous amount of non-usable products collected in a day. The non-recycle products are not decomposable that lead to various issues like infection such as malaria, typhoid, etc. It creates pollution into the sources of air, water, and land; when we try to clean up these products; it is another factor that several people affected by cancer who is living near to the garbage warehouse. In conclusion, the method throws away has a lot of benefits to manufacturing industry outweigh of end-users; the non-degradable products creates a huge impact on the society that set up an unhealthy environment. Government and other self organizations need to help the society that creates awareness about various diseases and issues; cite the guidelines to the public as well as industries.
Nowadays,
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people
adopted such a way that consumed things and throw
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away
even though
it is
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very
useful. It became a habit
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because
of availability and its consumption,
especially
in the essential
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goods
.

To
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begin
with, the manufacture units are far
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away
from the city and it is a
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bad
choice to deliver consumer
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products
with recycled or decompose materials. The production cost of recycled items is
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very
high.
For example
,
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20mm
micron non-usable item production cost is $2
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but
reusable
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product
cost is $10.
In General
,
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people
opt the low-cost items if it is similar quality and quantity of
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product
.
Also
, the availability and reliability of the recycling things are
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very
low in the market and it is not fulfilling the business needs on
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expected
time. Consume and throw
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away
culture has
been introduced
by various
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companies
,
especially
in food items.

On the other hand
, these
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used
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products
were dispatched
to the garbage; there were a tremendous amount of non-usable
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products
collected in a day. The non-recycle
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products
are not decomposable that lead to various issues like infection such as malaria, typhoid, etc. It creates pollution into the sources of air, water, and land; when we try to clean up these
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products
; it is another factor that several
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people
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affected
by cancer who is living near to the garbage warehouse.

In conclusion
, the method throws
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away
has
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a lot of
benefits to manufacturing industry outweigh of
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end
-users; the non-degradable
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products
creates a huge impact on the society that set up an unhealthy environment.
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Government
and other self organizations need to
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help
the society that creates awareness about various diseases and issues; cite the guidelines to the public
as well
as industries.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The ownership of cars should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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