The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree? v.8
The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. v. 8
Family environment and upbringing has a huge impact on the psychology of a child. The large number of people opine that it is solely the outcome of bad parenting, but, I do not totally agree with it.
To begin to I don’t agree with this argument. We live in a time where society plays a major role in moulding an individual. Societal pressures have both positive and negative impact on the younger generations. Today’s generation is exposed to a variety of digital devices through which they can watch or share anything. Nowadays, an entertainment industry has genres like horror, violence, scenes of cold blooded murder, rape and other crimes in the movie and in games and also younger people commit crime due to scarcity of resources to fulfil their wants. There is a drastic difference between children who watch violent videos and news and the ones who is more into cartoons and educational programmers.
The other hands, we cannot say that parents do not influence on their children. Parents can influence the children to a certain extend and can imbibe good value system to the youngster. The first years of life children copy and inherits the behaviour of parents, the first words. It depends on the parents, whether the child can empathize, care, be a kind and responsive person. Will he be neat, organized, responsible people.
In conclusion, Parents can influence the children to a certain extend and can imbibe good value system to the youngster, but other influences like friends, an awful company, society, digital media also play a vital role in creating pivotal changes to the youngster’s mindset.
Family environment and upbringing has a huge impact on the psychology of a child. The large number of
people
opine that it is
solely
the outcome of
bad
parenting,
but
, I do not
totally
agree
with it.
To
begin
to I don’t
agree
with this argument. We
live
in a
time where
society plays a major role in
moulding
an individual. Societal pressures have both
positive
and
negative
impact on the younger generations.
Today
’s generation
is exposed
to a variety of digital devices through which they can
watch
or share anything. Nowadays, an entertainment industry has genres like horror, violence, scenes of
cold blooded
murder, rape and other crimes in the movie and in games and
also
younger
people
commit crime due to scarcity of resources to fulfil their wants. There is a drastic difference between
children
who
watch
violent videos and news and the ones who
is
more into cartoons and educational programmers.
The other hands, we cannot say that
parents
do not
influence
on their
children
.
Parents
can
influence
the
children
to a certain
extend
and can imbibe
good
value system to the youngster. The
first
years of life
children
copy and inherits the
behaviour
of
parents
, the
first
words. It depends on the
parents
, whether the child can empathize, care, be a kind and responsive person. Will he be neat, organized, responsible
people
.
In conclusion
,
Parents
can
influence
the
children
to a certain
extend
and can imbibe
good
value system to the youngster,
but
other
influences
like friends, an awful
company
, society, digital media
also
play a vital role in creating pivotal
changes
to the youngster’s mindset.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes