All around the world, the living standards are becoming higher and all more similar to western society. This changing in the everyday life brings also its contradictions and drawbacks, like the dramatic increasing in the number of overweight people. This problem is even more worrying if we consider the number of overweight children, which causes will be treated in this essay.
One of the reasons lots of people think is the cause of such a problem is the exponentially growing number of fast food outlets in developed countries. Fast foods originally were places where to eat a meal in few times, but now have become also the easiest and cheapest solution to have lunch all over the world. Consequently millions of families prefer to eat in fast foods where the food is appealing, thanks to the huge work on advertisements, and the cost is reasonable. Therefore, parents bring their children to the fast food outlets, where food isn't organic at all and the dimensions of a meal are completely over-proportioned.
However, parents are responsible for their children's diet and have to look after them in order to avoid they become overweight or even obese. Parents have to find time to prepare healthy food for children, for example, fresh vegetables or meat, that don't require more than half an hour of cooking. Moreover, parents have to free their children's diet from sweets, exchanging them with fresh fruit.
In conclusion, both fast foods and lack of parental control are causes of the increasing number of overweight children. Consequently, a change in familiar eating habits and in fast food outlets menus could prevent the risk of a future worldwide spread obesity problem.
All around the world, the living standards are becoming higher and all more similar to western society. This changing in the everyday life brings
also
its contradictions and drawbacks, like the dramatic increasing in the
number
of
overweight
people
. This problem is even more worrying if we consider the
number
of
overweight
children
, which causes will
be treated
in this essay.
One of the reasons lots of
people
think
is the cause of such a problem is the
exponentially
growing
number
of
fast
food
outlets in
developed countries
.
Fast
foods
originally
were places where to eat a meal in few times,
but
now
have become
also
the easiest and cheapest solution to have lunch all over the world.
Consequently
millions of families prefer to eat in
fast
foods
where the
food
is appealing, thanks to the huge work on advertisements, and the cost is reasonable.
Therefore
,
parents
bring their
children
to the
fast
food
outlets, where
food
isn't organic at all and the dimensions of a meal are completely over-proportioned.
However
,
parents
are responsible for their children's diet and
have to
look after them in order to avoid they become
overweight
or even obese.
Parents
have to
find time to prepare healthy
food
for
children
,
for example
, fresh vegetables or meat, that don't require more than half an hour of cooking.
Moreover
,
parents
have to
free their children's diet from sweets, exchanging them with fresh fruit.
In conclusion
, both
fast
foods
and lack of parental control are causes of the increasing
number
of
overweight
children
.
Consequently
, a
change
in familiar eating habits and in
fast
food
outlets menus could
prevent
the
risk
of a future worldwide spread obesity problem.
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