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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world especially in this era of technology Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics How much can we t v.2

The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world especially in this era of technology Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics How much can we t v. 2
It is very easy in this contemporary era to get the right and meaningful information throughout the internet because of the tremendous advancement in technology. People can get it very smoothly in seconds via websites, but this could be possible because of journalists. Folks reckoned that sometime news can be fake cause of false or careless journalists. Here, I am going to extend the statement and as well as my aspects in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, there are plethora of news appear everyday in the real world which are possible only because of the news reporter. Masses of reporters do their best job who provides each and everything extremely truth whereas few of the people those who spreads rumour in the society and makes the bad image of all. For instance, either a rotten apple or a bad fish, remember, both will spoil the surroundings. In addition, in this competitive period of time people do not double check the news they just click and uploaded it. They all are doing this profession for raising money because the well known news firms always wanted to get any eye catchy news which can capture the public and then they can increase their TRP( television rating point). Moreover, public should not blindly rely on any journalist first they should investigate about him/her via internet because in this present world everything is available on internet so we can use it and make sure ourselves about anything. Furthermore, people should compare and should check the news with other reporter if the news somewhere seems same as you read then they should declare it real. In conclusion, as people all knows news are playing pivotal role in the world but not all of them are real because we have bad and good journalists so it is our responsibility to wary from fake news and find out the real one by our own efforts.
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the right and meaningful information throughout the internet
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because
of the tremendous advancement in technology.
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very
smoothly
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this could be possible
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of
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journalists
. Folks reckoned that sometime
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news
can be fake cause of false or careless
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journalists
. Here, I am going to extend the statement and
as well
as my aspects in upcoming paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, there are plethora of
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news
appear
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everyday
in the real world which are possible
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only
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because
of the
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reporter. Masses of reporters do their best job who provides each and everything
extremely
truth whereas few of the
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people
those who spreads
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rumour
in the society and
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makes
the
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bad
image of all.
For instance
, either a rotten apple or a
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bad
fish, remember, both will spoil the surroundings.
In addition
, in this competitive period of time
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people
do not double
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check
the
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news
they
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just
click and uploaded it. They all are doing this profession for raising money
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because
the well known
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news
firms always wanted to
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get
any eye catchy
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news
which can capture the
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public and
then they can increase their TRP
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(
television rating point).

Moreover
, public should not
blindly
rely on any
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journalist
first
they should investigate about him/her via internet
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because
in this present world everything is available on internet
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so
we can
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use
it and
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make
sure ourselves about anything.
Furthermore
,
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people
should compare and should
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check
the
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news
with other reporter if the
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news
somewhere seems same as you read then they should declare it real.

In conclusion
, as
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people
all knows
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news
are playing pivotal role in the world
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not all of them are real
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because
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bad
and
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good
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journalists
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so
it is our responsibility to wary from fake
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news
and find out the real one by our
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own
efforts.
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19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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If we spoke a different language, we would perceive a somewhat different world.
Ludwig Wittgenstein

IELTS essay The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world especially in this era of technology Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics How much can we t v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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