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The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists? v.2

The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists? v. 2
In this day and age, thanks to the technological advancements, people can instantly access to global information through many news and reports. This condition also raises a question of integrity and ethics of journalists. From my perspective, we cannot completely trust the journalists for the following reason. It is inevitable that the competition of journalism industry can negatively affect the reliability of news and reports in some ways. In order to gain the achievement over their counterparts, some publishing agencies can include an enormous number of click bait news on their web pages. What is more, it is the speed requirement for writing articles that make the writers cannot criticize their report before submitting to their managers. To exemplify, in the COVID-19 Pandemic, there comes a large amount of superficial news on the social media, which derives from from lack of journalists’ authenticity. It is undeniable that there are still many couragous and professional pressman who are taking their profession as a responsibility to bring the readers more profound news. Nevertheless, due to the competition in this industry, the journalists seem to take the risk of their own career to show the truth to the audience. Such journalists are showing us the true value of information; furthermore, it is also a way to make the life better. Taking all things into consideration, we can obtain more benefits from the help of innovative techniques. However, we also cannot prevent its drawbacks, namely fabricated news is ubiquitous. For this reason, as the informed audiences, we should be wary of unreliable journalists and aware of doing crosscheck for the facts and truths when reading a piece of information.
In this day and age, thanks to the technological advancements,
people
can
instantly
access to global information through
many
news
and reports. This condition
also
raises a question of integrity and ethics of
journalists
. From my perspective, we cannot completely trust the
journalists
for the following reason.

It is inevitable that the competition of journalism industry can
negatively
affect the reliability of
news
and reports in
some
ways. In order to gain the achievement over their counterparts,
some
publishing agencies can include an enormous number of
click bait
news
on their web pages.
What is more
, it is the speed requirement for writing articles that
make
the writers cannot criticize their report
before
submitting to their managers. To exemplify, in the COVID-19 Pandemic, there
comes
a large amount of superficial
news
on the social media, which derives
from from
lack of
journalists’
authenticity.

It is undeniable that there are
still
many
couragous
and professional
pressman
who are taking their profession as a responsibility to bring the readers more profound
news
.
Nevertheless
, due to the competition in this industry, the
journalists
seem to take the
risk
of their
own
career to
show
the truth to the audience. Such
journalists
are showing us the true value of information;
furthermore
, it is
also
a way to
make
the life better.

Taking all things into consideration, we can obtain more benefits from the
help
of innovative techniques.
However
, we
also
cannot
prevent
its drawbacks,
namely
fabricated
news
is ubiquitous.
For this reason
, as the informed audiences, we should be wary of unreliable
journalists
and aware of doing crosscheck for the facts and truths when reading a piece of information.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists? v. 2

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4 paragraphs
275 words
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