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The map below show a book store in 2000 and now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.1

The map below show a book store in 2000 and now
The education system has changed over the last 50 years. There are opinions that, in schools and colleges, too much importance being given to teach theory based subjects while giving minimum priority for practical sessions. I completely agree with this view. The current academic structure doesn't promote the practical knowledge. In the recent times, the administrative authorities in schools and colleges take lab sessions for granted and show minimal interest in bringing the advanced tools and equipments to the laboratory. In addition, laboratory subjects are allocated with minimum time slot to finish all the experiments when compared to other topics. To illustrate, according to a survey conducted by a news channel, 90 percentage of engineering colleges' workshop's are not just dependent on 20th century scientific machines but also without a qualified instructor to guide the students. Obviously, these developments would not encourage any learner to focus on gaining the experimental ideas. However, a total contradicting behaviour could be seen in the government as well the universities when it comes to propagating the idea of theory based learning in the academics. In primary schools, children's are asked to memorise the poems, mathematical formulae, and name of the dynasty and so on. In colleges, graduates are encouraged to deduce the complex derivations without a single error. But a similar guidance to carry out the experiments with 100 percent accuracy is being missed. Admittedly, these trends have made the learners willingly or unwillingly to concentrate more on the fact based learning. To conclude, today's curriculum has totally become a theory oriented. There is hardly any sign of an impetus given by the government to promote the students to engage themselves in workshops.
The education system has
changed
over the last 50 years. There are opinions that, in schools and colleges, too much importance being
given
to teach theory based subjects while giving minimum priority for practical sessions. I completely
agree
with this view.

The
current
academic structure doesn't promote the practical knowledge. In the recent times, the administrative authorities in schools and colleges take lab sessions for granted and
show
minimal interest in bringing the advanced tools and equipments to the laboratory.
In addition
, laboratory subjects
are allocated
with minimum time slot to finish all the experiments when compared to other topics. To illustrate, according to a survey conducted by a news channel, 90 percentage of engineering colleges'
workshop's
are not
just
dependent on 20th century scientific machines
but
also
without a qualified instructor to guide the students.
Obviously
, these developments would not encourage any learner to focus on gaining the experimental
ideas
.

However
, a total contradicting
behaviour
could be
seen
in the
government
as well
the universities when it
comes
to propagating the
idea
of theory based learning in the academics. In primary schools, children's
are asked
to
memorise
the poems, mathematical formulae, and name of the dynasty and
so
on. In colleges, graduates
are encouraged
to deduce the complex derivations without a single error.
But
a similar guidance to carry out the experiments with 100 percent accuracy is
being missed
.
Admittedly
, these trends have made the learners
willingly
or
unwillingly
to concentrate more on the fact based learning.

To conclude
,
today
's curriculum has
totally
become a theory oriented. There is hardly any
sign
of an impetus
given
by the
government
to promote the students to engage themselves in workshops.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The map below show a book store in 2000 and now

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
279 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.5
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