the internet has become so efficient and popular that many people rely on it for learning. some suggest that it could replace the use of books as the main source of knowledge for education. do you support or oppose the opinion? explain your position v.3
the internet has become so efficient and popular that many people rely on it for learning. some suggest that it could replace the use of books as the main source of knowledge for education. do you support or oppose the opinion? explain your position v. 3
Whereas some argue that raising children in our modern society is harder than in old times, others claim that it is much simpler because of new inventions. In my opinion, while in the past children were not so exposed to strangers as today, raising a child nowadays is easier due to innovations in health system.
First of all, innovations in health care have helped people to give proper medical assistance for their children. Thus, it is cheaper than ever to take care of an infant on his or her early stage of life. For example, not only vaccination costs dropped consistently due to recent innovations on medical methods, but also medical equipment has been modernized leading to cheaper exams. Consequently, child mortality has declined significantly over the past decades, especially in developing countries.
On the other hand, new technologies have made easier for children to access the internet. Hence, increasing the danger of exposing them to strangers, since children are easily fooled by strangers, and parents are not always monitoring their conversations as they should. For instance, a stranger can either convince a youth on meeting him willing to do to do some harm or induce the youth to hurt someone else or itself. Therefore, restricting children's online communication can mitigate this risk but will not solve the problem completely.
In conclusion, while improvements in the health care system have made the task of raising a child easier, internet access presents a risk at the moment children can get in contact with strangers. Then, in my opinion the innovations in medical area outweigh the risk of exposing the children on the internet.
Whereas
some
argue that raising
children
in our modern society is harder than in
old
times, others claim that it is much simpler
because
of new inventions. In my opinion, while in the past
children
were not
so
exposed to
strangers
as
today
, raising a child nowadays is easier due to
innovations
in health system.
First of all
,
innovations
in health care have
helped
people
to give proper
medical
assistance for their
children
.
Thus
, it is cheaper than ever to take care of an infant on
his or her
early stage of life.
For example
, not
only
vaccination costs dropped
consistently
due to recent
innovations
on
medical
methods,
but
also
medical
equipment has
been modernized
leading to cheaper exams.
Consequently
, child mortality has declined
significantly
over the past decades,
especially
in
developing countries
.
On the other hand
, new technologies have made easier for
children
to access the internet.
Hence
, increasing the
danger
of exposing them to
strangers
, since
children
are
easily
fooled by
strangers
, and parents are not always monitoring their conversations as they should.
For instance
, a
stranger
can either convince a youth on meeting him willing
to do to do
some
harm or induce the youth to hurt someone else or itself.
Therefore
, restricting children's online communication can mitigate this
risk
but
will not solve the problem completely.
In conclusion
, while improvements in the health care system have made the task of raising a child easier, internet access presents a
risk
at the moment
children
can
get
in contact with
strangers
. Then, in my opinion the
innovations
in
medical
area outweigh the
risk
of exposing the
children
on the internet.
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