Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extend do you agree or disagree? v.27

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 27
There is no doubt that climate changes represent a major threat to life on Earth. Some people argue that we have to accept it rather than try to stop it. However, I completely disagree with the idea as I think we still have time to tackle this problem by considering the contribution of governments and individuals and reduce the human impact on the Earth's climate. With regard to the government, there are various measures that the government can consider to prevent, or at least mitigate climate change. For instance, high authorities could introduce laws to limit carbon dioxide emissions that lead to global warming. Further, the government can impose 'green taxes' on drivers, airline companies and other polluters so that they tend to think upon investment in renewable energy production from solar, wind and water. In contrast, millions of people would eventually face many health-related issues, such as lung cancer, breathing problems and many more respiratory diseases. As for individuals, people can also contribute a lot to reduce the impact of climate change, by using energy efficiently. To illustrate this point, as a person, we should try to limit the usages of energy, by flying less, using bicycles and public transport. Moreover, we should also think to take various steps like consuming solar energy efficiently and creatively to the consumption of water and natural resources. Conversely, if we try to live with this climate change, I do not think we even have the ability to cope up with a small rise in sea level, especially in those countries which do not have any means of safeguard in low-lying areas. Rather, the myriad of people might be displaced by flooding and lost their homes or jobs, instead, they might be required to migrate to nearby cities, or perhaps to other countries, thus increased homelessness and poverty. In conclusion, it is clear to me that the governments and individuals have to come together and address this climate change issue, rather than ignoring and living with this problem.
There is no doubt that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
changes
represent a major threat to life on Earth.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
argue that we
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
accept it
rather
than try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
it.
However
, I completely disagree with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
as I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
we
still
have time to tackle this problem by considering the contribution of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
and individuals and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the human impact on the Earth's climate.

With regard to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
, there are various measures that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
can consider to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
prevent
, or at least mitigate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
.
For instance
, high authorities could introduce laws to limit carbon dioxide emissions that lead to global warming.
Further
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
can impose 'green taxes' on drivers, airline
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
and other polluters
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that they tend to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
upon investment in renewable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
production from solar, wind and water.
In contrast
, millions of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
would
eventually
face
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
health-related issues, such as lung cancer, breathing problems and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
more respiratory diseases.

As for individuals,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
can
also
contribute a lot to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the impact of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
, by using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
efficiently
. To illustrate this point, as a person, we should try to limit the usages of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
, by flying less, using bicycles and public transport.
Moreover
, we should
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
to take various steps like consuming solar
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
energy
efficiently
and
creatively
to the consumption of water and natural resources.
Conversely
, if we try to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
, I do not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
think
we even have the ability to cope up with a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
rise in sea level,
especially
in those countries which do not have any means of safeguard in low-lying areas.
Rather
, the myriad of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
might
be displaced
by flooding and lost their homes or jobs,
instead
, they might
be required
to migrate to nearby cities, or perhaps to other countries,
thus
increased homelessness and poverty.

In conclusion
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
to me that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
and individuals
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
together and address this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
issue,
rather
than ignoring and living with this problem.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. v. 27

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts