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The increased use of text messaging using mobile phones is larely to blame for falling standards in written English, particularly among young people, many of whom are unable to construct grammatically correct sentences. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

The increased use of text messaging using mobile phones is larely to blame for falling standards in written English, particularly among young people, many of whom are unable to construct grammatically correct sentences. with this statement? v. 1
Nowadays, lots of teenagers and young adults usually misspell words or use grammar incorrectly. Some people blame the widespread use of text messaging applications on the phone, but I disagree with this opinion. In my perspective, our today’s rushing lifestyle and human’s laziness are the culprit of this problem. Firstly, in the present, people live in a quicker lifestyle compared to the past, salarymen rush into their offices and commuters walk faster in order to reach their destinations in no time. Life is accelerated, same as the way we communicate to each other. For example, the use of the word “OK” which derived from “All clear”. In the past, it was not commonly used and also seen as uneducated, but these days, it seems that “OK” or “Okay” are vital for replying to lots of our conversations. Secondly, since most people are created to innovate things that could make our life easier and this is the result of our laziness. Lots of acronyms are the evidence which illustrate how we utilise our creativity to talk or write a letter to each other. For instance, lots of youngsters and even some older people would prefer to use “ASAP” instead of “as soon as possible” or “u” instead of “you”. However, this type of English usage may give us consequences, such as less ability to use complex grammatical structures or inability to be adept at using English. Lastly, I do not think that text messaging using various mobile phones could undermine our ability to use English properly. Instead, it is possible that our lackadaisical traits within our body and swift lifestyles are causes of growing grammatical errors.
Nowadays,
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lots
of
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teenagers
and young adults
usually
misspell words or
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use
grammar
incorrectly
.
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Some
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people
blame the widespread
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use
of text messaging applications on the phone,
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but
I disagree with this opinion. In my perspective, our
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today
’s rushing lifestyle and human’s laziness are the culprit of this problem.

Firstly
, in the present,
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people
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live
in a quicker lifestyle compared to the past,
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salarymen
rush into their offices and commuters walk faster in order to reach their destinations in no time. Life
is accelerated
, same as the way we communicate to each other.
For example
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of the word “OK” which derived from “All
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
”. In the past, it was not
commonly
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used
and
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
as uneducated,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
these days, it seems that “OK” or “Okay” are vital for replying to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lots
of our conversations.

Secondly
, since most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are created
to innovate things that could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
our life easier and this is the result of our laziness.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Lots
of acronyms are the evidence which illustrate how we
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utilise
our creativity to talk or write a letter to each other.
For instance
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lots
of youngsters and even
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
older
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
would prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
“ASAP”
instead
of “as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible” or “u”
instead
of “you”.
However
, this type of English usage may give us consequences, such as less ability to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
complex grammatical structures or inability to be adept at using English.

Lastly
, I do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that text messaging using various mobile phones could undermine our ability to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
English
properly
.
Instead
, it is possible that our lackadaisical traits within our body and swift lifestyles are causes of growing grammatical errors.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
To learn a language is to have one more window from which to look at the world.
Chinese Proverb

IELTS essay The increased use of text messaging using mobile phones is larely to blame for falling standards in written English, particularly among young people, many of whom are unable to construct grammatically correct sentences. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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