The transformation of communication from physical to virtual has been yielded by the invent of cellular device. The increased use of cellular phone has its own advantages and disadvantages and I believe that advantages overweigh the disadvantages.
Firstly, Portable devices such as cellular phones have transformed the physical communication into its virtual counterpart as business communications and meetings are conducted through emails and video conferencing respectively. People can stay in regular contact with their friends and families through video calls or simple phone calls overseas or in the same region. Moreover, people can talk to strangers using social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, and snapchat.
Secondly, Cellular phones have been playing a key role in earning money for people with special skills. For instance, people can make videos of their skills and can ear money by getting high number of streamers on YouTube. People also can sell their products online and make money which is more likely an online business. People of all ages can gain immense knowledge about anything around the world within fraction of seconds with the use of mobile phones with internet which makes world even smaller.
In contrast, overuse of mobile phones has affected a physical communication among people and create more health issues such as eye strains and blurred vision. For instance, people from same family barely talk to each other and prefer to indulge more in their online life. As all the communications are taking place online, people have become more distant and sometimes that leads to the problems like stress and depression. However, these can be overcome by restricting usage of mobile phones and maintaining close contacts with family and friends.
To conclude, balance between usage of mobile phones and social life can help to achieve the best out of technology and physical relations.
The transformation of
communication
from
physical
to virtual has
been yielded
by the
invent
of
cellular
device. The increased
use
of
cellular
phone
has its
own
advantages and disadvantages and I believe that advantages
overweigh
the disadvantages.
Firstly
, Portable devices such as
cellular
phones
have transformed the
physical
communication
into its virtual counterpart as business communications and meetings
are conducted
through emails and video conferencing
respectively
.
People
can stay in regular contact with their friends and families through video calls or simple
phone
calls overseas or in the same region.
Moreover
,
people
can talk to strangers using social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, and
snapchat
.
Secondly
,
Cellular
phones
have been playing a key role in earning money for
people
with special
skills
.
For instance
,
people
can
make
videos of their
skills
and can ear money by getting high number of streamers on YouTube.
People
also
can sell their products
online
and
make
money which is more likely an
online
business.
People
of all ages can gain immense knowledge about anything around the world within fraction of seconds with the
use
of mobile
phones
with internet which
makes
world even smaller.
In contrast
, overuse of mobile
phones
has
affected
a
physical
communication
among
people
and create more health issues such as eye strains and blurred vision.
For instance
,
people
from same family
barely
talk to each other and prefer to indulge more in their
online
life. As all the communications are taking place
online
,
people
have become more distant and
sometimes
that leads to the problems like
stress
and depression.
However
, these can
be overcome
by restricting usage of mobile
phones
and maintaining close contacts with family and friends.
To conclude
, balance between usage of mobile
phones
and social life can
help
to achieve the best out of technology and
physical
relations.
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