In our day-to-day life the mobile phones have a significant role in the communication between people and their business. Nowadays people used mobile phone not only for the phone calls. One of the main advantages through the mobile phone is social networking is much faster and easier. Also, can use it all other technical purposes like taking photographs, banking, gaming, travelling purpose etc.
Firstly, there are some disadvantages while using mobile phones. Emitting radiation from mobile phone makes the critical medical and health problem for human being. Some of the medical research state that these radiations cause several kinds of cancer in the human body also chance to affect badly to the human reproduction system. Another main concern about the mobile is to distract the personal relationship.
Secondly, in present day the people do not want to spend time with family, and they always keep scrolling in mobile phones. Some people are looking for new unhealthy relationships and it makes a negative impact in trust relation. Children spend more time in phones rather than studying cause bad impact on their education career. Mobile phones are strictly prohibited while driving because it causes accidents on the roads. In film, theatre and cinemas requesting users to switch their phone off or silent.
To conclude, in some points mobile phones have some drawbacks, but it gives huge helps for a human's day to day life. So, people use it for the good aspect rather than wasting their time and it ensures great advantage of their life.
In our day-to-day life the mobile
phones
have a significant role in the communication between
people
and their business. Nowadays
people
used
mobile
phone
not
only
for the
phone
calls. One of the main advantages through the mobile
phone
is social networking is much faster and easier.
Also
, can
use
it all other technical purposes like taking photographs, banking, gaming, travelling purpose etc.
Firstly
, there are
some
disadvantages while using mobile
phones
. Emitting radiation from mobile
phone
makes
the critical medical and health problem for human being.
Some of the
medical research state that these radiations cause several kinds of cancer in the human body
also
chance to affect
badly
to the human reproduction system. Another main concern about the mobile is to distract the personal relationship.
Secondly
, in present day the
people
do not want to spend time with family, and they always
keep
scrolling in mobile
phones
.
Some
people
are looking for new unhealthy relationships and it
makes
a
negative
impact in trust relation. Children spend more time in
phones
rather
than studying cause
bad
impact on their education career. Mobile
phones
are
strictly
prohibited while driving
because
it causes accidents on the roads. In film,
theatre
and cinemas requesting users to switch their
phone
off or silent.
To conclude
, in
some
points mobile
phones
have
some
drawbacks,
but
it gives huge
helps
for a human's
day to day
life.
So
,
people
use
it for the
good
aspect
rather
than wasting their time and it ensures great advantage of their life.
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