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The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. what can be done to maintain biodiversity? v.1

The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. what can be done to maintain biodiversity? v. 1
Protection of Flora and fauna are of utmost importance now because of the dramatic rise in the lives of nature. there are many factors which are responsible for this cause. In the forthcoming paragraphs, the reasons and prevention measures will be discussed. there is no doubt that industries fumes and disposed waste in water have caused the ecosystem imbalance, In past few years, surge in global warming level and afforestation have made the survival of ocean and land life difficult, consequently, harming the vegetation, aquatic as well as terrestrial animals. For example, if pollution level was curbed long ago, dodo bird would not have gone extinct. Plastic bags thrown in the ocean are lethal and has killed innumerable fishes and other water life. Most of the human beings are indifferent towards the damaging effects on earth these uncivilised ways are doing. In order to safeguard plants and the endangered species who are vulnerable, strict measures should be taken. Like, felling of trees should be reduced, in addition to that people should be educated on the importance of tree plantation. All the factories can be moved far away from the areas where mother nature is not afflicted. For instance, a law was passed in few countries to move the manufacturing units to keep the sea life and unmitigated penalty was levied on those who flout the rules and regulations. As a result drastic improvement was noticed, saved river from contamination. To conclude, maintenance of ecological balance is crucial to our planet. Although it seems inevitable to completely eradicate the root cause of this problem, however, its detrimental Impact can surely be subdued by joint endeavours.
Protection of Flora and fauna are of utmost importance
now
because
of the dramatic rise in the
lives
of nature.
there
are
many
factors which are responsible for this cause. In the forthcoming paragraphs, the reasons and prevention measures will
be discussed
.

there
is no doubt that industries fumes and disposed waste in water have caused the ecosystem imbalance, In past few years, surge in global warming level and afforestation have made the survival of ocean and land life difficult,
consequently
, harming the vegetation, aquatic
as well
as terrestrial animals.
For example
, if pollution level
was curbed
long ago, dodo bird would not have gone extinct. Plastic bags thrown in the ocean are lethal and has killed innumerable fishes and other water life. Most of the human beings are indifferent towards the damaging effects on earth these
uncivilised
ways are doing.

In order to safeguard plants and the endangered species who are vulnerable, strict measures should
be taken
. Like, felling of trees should be
reduced
,
in addition
to that
people
should
be educated
on the importance of tree plantation. All the factories can be
moved
far away from the areas where mother nature is not afflicted.
For instance
, a law
was passed
in few countries to
move
the manufacturing units to
keep
the sea life and unmitigated penalty
was levied
on those who flout the
rules
and regulations.
As a result
drastic improvement
was noticed
, saved river from contamination.

To conclude
, maintenance of ecological balance is crucial to our planet. Although it seems inevitable to completely eradicate the root cause of this problem,
however
, its detrimental Impact can
surely
be subdued
by joint
endeavours
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS essay The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. what can be done to maintain biodiversity? v. 1

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  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
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