The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity? v.2
The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity? v. 2
Despite the fact we are spending funds and time for the safety of animals and birds but, I believe that we still need to do a lot more effort to keep these creatures from extinction.
Infect, we are known Wildlife species are one of the fundamental factors for the environmental sustainability. Although, we have been investing reasonable capital for the shelter of wildlife and endangered species. In addition to this, different NGO's and departments for their preservation have been developed by the different sectors of society. Namely, my country Pakistan has taken strong steps to cope up with the illegal killing of wild animals and taken legal actions against the violators.
Despite of all these efforts, we have lost many precious species in the past due to our negligence and careless attitude. Presently, there are a number of animals and birds, endangered by the human’s cruel behaviour. For instance, we are now on the verge of losing many wildlife animals and birds such as white hippopotamus, gorillas, Californian condor etc. , From the face of earth. For example, In Recent era, we have seen the extinction of Tasmanian tiger and dodo birds. They could have saved if the public has taken proper measures for their safety and protection.
Therefore, while concluding, I highly emphasize that societies should do more struggle in order to preserve these animals and birds. Governments must develop stringent rules and regulation for their preservation alongside proper law enforcement. If we do not able to take proper actions for their shelter, then ultimately, we may face a severe environmental damage in our world that will be irreversible.
Despite the fact we are spending funds and time for the safety of
animals
and
birds
but
, I believe that we
still
need to do a lot more effort to
keep
these creatures from extinction.
Infect, we
are known
Wildlife species are one of the fundamental factors for the environmental sustainability. Although, we have been investing reasonable capital for the shelter of wildlife and endangered species.
In addition
to this,
different
NGO's and departments for their preservation have
been developed
by the
different
sectors of society.
Namely
, my country Pakistan has taken strong steps to cope up with the illegal killing of wild
animals
and taken legal actions against the violators.
Despite of
all these efforts, we have lost
many
precious species in the past due to our negligence and careless attitude.
Presently
, there are a number of
animals
and
birds
, endangered by the human’s cruel
behaviour
.
For instance
, we are
now
on the verge of losing
many
wildlife
animals
and
birds
such as white hippopotamus, gorillas, Californian condor etc.
,
From the face of earth.
For example
, In Recent era, we have
seen
the extinction of Tasmanian tiger and dodo
birds
. They could have saved if the public has taken proper measures for their safety and protection.
Therefore
, while concluding, I
highly
emphasize that societies should do more struggle in order to preserve these
animals
and
birds
.
Governments
must
develop stringent
rules
and regulation for their preservation alongside proper law enforcement. If we do not able to take proper actions for their shelter, then
ultimately
, we may face
a severe environmental damage
in our world that will be irreversible.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes