Nowadays, many people are playing the video games, with the extensive use of the Internet. Not only the educated persons, but also the people from the rural background are also addicted to video games. It has its own pros and cons.
Firstly, I want to discuss about the advantages. Video games help to improve the brain logic, memory power and concentration levels. It will be a good tool if we used in education and research. Secondly, it will give some relaxation if we stressed in our work that is changing of mind depending on situations.
On the other hand, it has its disadvantages too. People are spending a lot of time before the video games consequently, this leads to eye problems. Especially students and children are more addicted to the games without knowing the time and neglecting their studies. Obviously, they did not find time to spend with the family. They are alone before the computers or mobiles thinking that their world is only with that device. They forget the physical exercise and playing with their friends, which causes loneliness. Exercise leads to good health and makes them active. Recently many people are dead because of some video game, assuming that they are the persons in that game and forgets that they are the players.
In my conclusion, people are mostly using video games for entertainment purpose rather than an educational tool. Over usage of anything will cause damage. So, it is better to use things for appropriate purposes. People who create video games may think innovative in the ways, how these games will create an impact on the persons those who are using.
Nowadays,
many
people
are playing the
video
games
, with the extensive
use
of the Internet. Not
only
the educated persons,
but
also
the
people
from the rural background are
also
addicted to
video
games
. It has its
own
pros and cons.
Firstly
, I want to
discuss about the
advantages.
Video
games
help
to
improve
the brain logic, memory power and concentration levels. It will be a
good
tool if we
used
in education and research.
Secondly
, it will give
some
relaxation if we
stressed
in our work
that is
changing of mind depending on situations.
On the other hand
, it has its disadvantages too.
People
are spending
a lot of
time
before
the
video
games
consequently
, this leads to eye problems.
Especially
students and children are more addicted to the
games
without knowing the time and neglecting their studies.
Obviously
, they did not find time to spend with the family. They are alone
before
the computers or mobiles thinking that their world is
only
with that device. They forget the physical exercise and playing with their friends, which causes loneliness. Exercise leads to
good
health and
makes
them active. Recently
many
people
are dead
because
of
some
video
game, assuming that they are the persons in that game and forgets that they are the players.
In my conclusion,
people
are
mostly
using
video
games
for entertainment purpose
rather
than an educational tool. Over usage of anything will cause damage.
So
, it is better to
use
things for appropriate purposes.
People
who create
video
games
may
think
innovative in the ways, how these
games
will create an impact on the persons those who are using.
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