The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014 v.1
The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language by language learned for the years 2006 to 2014 v. 1
Certain individuals believe that when visiting tourist and cultural attractions of a nation, foreign visitors should pay more than local people. This essay strongly disagrees with the aforementioned statement. This essay will first, discuss that nation by charging more from foreign tourist will enable cultural difference between people and further, outline that foreigners will not visit such countries if they will have to pay more.
It is clear that when foreign tourists will pay more for visiting historical places and other monuments, the nation is developing segregation among people on the basis of their culture. This is to say, foreigners will believe that just because they belong to a different religion, the province they are visiting is not treating them equalling and thus, they are asked to pay more. As a result, it will portray a bad image of the country reduce the amount of tourists.
Apart from this, if the countries will charge more from foreign tourists, they will stop visiting the country because of high expenses. In other words, foreign people have already spent a huge amount of their income in buying tickets, booking hotels and food. If the countries will also force them to pay high ticket costs for visiting monuments. They will eliminate the idea of a trip to that province. As a consequence, the country's will attract a less number of tourists.
To conclude, In my opinion, I vehemently agree, that province who charge huge amount of money from foreigners for visiting monuments, will not only exhibit the image of promoting cultural discrimination but will also attract a less number of tourists.
Certain individuals believe that when visiting
tourist
and cultural attractions of a nation,
foreign
visitors should
pay
more than local
people
. This essay
strongly
disagrees with the aforementioned statement. This essay will
first
, discuss that nation by charging more from
foreign
tourist
will enable cultural difference between
people
and
further
, outline that foreigners will not visit such
countries
if they will
have to
pay
more.
It is
clear
that when
foreign
tourists
will
pay
more for visiting historical places and other monuments, the nation is developing segregation among
people
on the basis of their culture. This is to say, foreigners will believe that
just
because
they belong to a
different
religion, the province they are visiting is not treating them equalling and
thus
, they
are asked
to
pay
more.
As a result
, it will portray a
bad
image of the
country
reduce
the amount of tourists.
Apart from this, if the
countries
will charge more from
foreign
tourists
, they will
stop
visiting the
country
because
of high expenses.
In other words
,
foreign
people
have already spent a huge amount of their income in buying tickets, booking hotels and food. If the
countries
will
also
force them to
pay
high ticket costs for visiting monuments. They will eliminate the
idea
of a trip to that province. As a consequence, the country's will attract a less number of tourists.
To conclude
, In my opinion, I
vehemently
agree
, that province who charge huge amount of money from foreigners for visiting monuments, will not
only
exhibit the image of promoting cultural discrimination
but
will
also
attract a less number of
tourists
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes