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The graph below shows the percentage change in places where students lived over five decades.

The graph below shows the percentage change in places where students lived over five decades.

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The graphs illustrate information about different kinds of student accommodation from 1960s to 2000s. Overall, most of the youngsters chose room in a shared house or flat with other students as the place where they stay. On the other hand, there was only a few students stayed at home with own family during the given period of time. In 1960s, the percentage of students resided in room in a shared house or flaat with other students and paying guest with a host family were the same amount, 35%. Particularly, in the next 40 years, room in a shared house or flat with other students' figure rose by leaps and bounds to its peak, roughly 70%. In contrast, students who paying guest with a host family witnessed a gradual decrease, from 35% to around 5% by the end of the period. Initially, students opted students hall of residence and at home with own family accounted for 15%. After that, students hall of residence's figure had a minor fluctuated and then fell to approximately 13%. Additionally, the quantity of students lived at home with own family reduce steadily, reached 5% by the year 1990s. However, it increased to the same amount as student hall of residence's within the nest 10 years.
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