It has been argued by many that protection of the environment is an important task of the government and people should be taken to task for their actions affecting the environmental conditions. In my opinion, I fully agree with this as it will inculcate a sense of responsibility among the inhabitants and will also keep the surroundings neat and clean.
On the one hand, it's the duty of a state to keep a check on the activities, of its citizens, affecting the locality. Firstly, awareness should be created by media campaigns. Secondly, rules should be made and communicated to all regarding the protection of surroundings. Furthermore, adequate facilities must be provided for the uplift and upkeep of the area. This will, ultimately, develop responsible attitudes among the people and they will try to preserve the nature as their utmost duty. For instance, the Swiss people are among those who have kept the natural beauty in its original shape and they are backed up by their rulers as well.
On the other hand, people should be encouraged to keep their vicinities protected and dirt free. Apart from cleaning their homes, they are also expected to keep their nearby town updated. This can be achieved by providing garbage bins, a sanitation truck for collection of all filthy material and recycling of the whole material. Moreover, community centres must be tasked to keep an eye on the sanitary conditions of the cities and helping in maintaining the world pollution free. For example, the same practice has been followed in the UAE where the government has fixed monitoring devices to keep the towns beautiful.
To conclude, I believe that natural resources are available to all of us in one form or the other, but it's our duty to keep them safe and protected. 
It has  
been argued
 by  
many
 that protection of the environment is an  
important
 task of the  
government
 and  
people
 should  
be taken
 to task for their actions affecting the environmental conditions. In my opinion, I  
fully
  agree
 with this as it will inculcate a sense of responsibility among the inhabitants and will  
also
  keep
 the surroundings neat and clean.
On the one hand, it's the duty of a state to  
keep
 a  
check
 on the activities, of its citizens, affecting the locality.  
Firstly
, awareness should  
be created
 by media campaigns.  
Secondly
,  
rules
 should  
be made
 and communicated to all regarding the protection of surroundings.  
Furthermore
, adequate facilities  
must
  be provided
 for the uplift and upkeep of the area. This will,  
ultimately
, develop responsible attitudes among the  
people and
 they will try to preserve the nature as their utmost duty.  
For instance
, the Swiss  
people
 are among those who have  
kept
 the natural beauty in its original  
shape and
 they  
are backed
 up by their rulers  
as well
. 
On the other hand
,  
people
 should  
be encouraged
 to  
keep
 their  
vicinities
 protected and dirt free. Apart from cleaning their homes, they are  
also
  expected
 to  
keep
 their nearby town updated. This can  
be achieved
 by providing garbage bins, a sanitation truck for collection of all filthy material and recycling of the whole material.  
Moreover
, community  
centres
  must
  be tasked
 to  
keep
 an eye on the sanitary conditions of the cities and helping in maintaining the world pollution free.  
For example
, the same practice has  
been followed
 in the UAE where the  
government
 has  
fixed
 monitoring devices to  
keep
 the towns  
beautiful
. 
To conclude
, I believe that natural resources are available to all of us in one form or the other,  
but
 it's our duty to  
keep
 them safe and protected. 
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes