The government should spent more money on railways than on roads. What do you think about this? v.1
The government should spent more money on railways than on roads. What do you think about this? v. 1
Transport systems have been developed by the governments. Some beliefs that railways are more significant than roads. I will briefly explain this situation by supporting using commonly railways.
The population, which is in the cities are increasing day by day. Thus, the people need more public transports ever before. All municipalities should spend funds in order to rise roads, bridges, subways, railways. Admittedly, railways are safer than others, because of this, novelty will be done in there. They are suitable for the new century, just like a plane comfort. For example, in early 1900s in Turkey, many railways were constructed to travel safe and comfort. Most individuals chose to travel with these trains, not only business travel, but also tourist events. It is clear that traffic accidents were less at trains both in the past, and now.
On the other hand, trains can be transported more people than buses or automobiles. Trains not only carrying capacity, also fast. For instance, the train's fast 400km/ in an hour, however a car just would be reached 150km/ in an hour in my city's facilities. I prefer going to anywhere by this train. Hence, my vocation is less 2 hours. I save my time, my safety like us others. That is to say, railways investing should be more, most of the funds should build them by the governments.
In conclusion, I restate that The municipalities and governments should support in order to increase railways. Because of this, they are safe, fast, and contemporary for public transport. In addition, many individuals alter to them visiting and tourist events.
Transport systems have
been developed
by the
governments
.
Some
beliefs that
railways
are more significant than roads. I will
briefly
explain
this situation by supporting using
commonly
railways.
The population, which is in the cities are increasing day by day.
Thus
, the
people
need more public transports ever
before
. All municipalities should spend funds in order to rise roads, bridges, subways,
railways
.
Admittedly
,
railways
are safer than others,
because of this
, novelty will
be done
in there. They are suitable for the new century,
just
like a
plane
comfort.
For example
, in early 1900s in Turkey,
many
railways
were constructed
to travel safe and comfort. Most individuals chose to travel with these
trains
, not
only
business travel,
but
also
tourist
events
. It is
clear
that traffic accidents were less at
trains
both in the past, and
now
.
On the other hand
,
trains
can
be transported
more
people
than buses or automobiles.
Trains
not
only
carrying capacity,
also
fast
.
For instance
, the train's
fast
400km
/ in an hour,
however
a car
just
would
be reached
150km
/ in an hour in my city's facilities. I prefer going to anywhere by this
train
.
Hence
, my vocation is less 2 hours. I save my time, my safety like us others.
That is
to say,
railways
investing should be more, most of the funds should build them by the
governments
.
In conclusion
, I restate that The municipalities and
governments
should support in order to increase
railways
.
Because of this
, they are safe,
fast
, and contemporary for public transport.
In addition
,
many
individuals alter to them visiting and tourist
events
.
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8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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