It is argued by many people that the ministry should not spend funds on arts and should rather invest the same for sanitation and infrastructure. I completely disagree with this, as along with investing money on infrastructure and sanitation, some portion of the money should be kept aside for the arts.
To begin with, the art and culture of a nation depict its heritage, therefore, makes it vital for the government to keep some funds aside for the arts. The expenditure to maintain the monuments and the museums have huge costs, and the same cannot be managed without the support from the ministry. In addition, when we maintain the arts and culture, it will encourage more tourists to visit our country, leading to an increase in the revenue. To illustrate, Rome is known for its art and culture, it is one of the main reasons why it is a popular destination for the visit of tourists.
However, for a developing country, the government should focus on providing proper sanitation and infrastructure facilities for its citizens. This means the government will need funds that would help in improving the sanitation levels and also the infrastructure of the city. This would mean, there would be very less funds which could be invested in the arts. Better sanitation conditions can result in reducing the diseases and good infrastructure will improve the trades and the daily commuting in the nation.
To conclude, some portion of the money should to spend on arts and culture which will help in preserving our heritage and also generating more revenue from tourism, however the government should first look at improving the sanitation and infrastructure levels in the country.
It
is argued
by
many
people
that the ministry should not spend funds on
arts
and should
rather
invest the same for
sanitation
and
infrastructure
. I completely disagree with this, as along with investing money on
infrastructure
and
sanitation
,
some
portion of the money should be
kept
aside for the arts.
To
begin
with, the
art
and
culture
of a nation depict its heritage,
therefore
,
makes
it vital for the
government
to
keep
some
funds aside for the
arts
. The expenditure to maintain the monuments and the museums have huge costs, and the same cannot
be managed
without the support from the ministry.
In addition
, when we maintain the
arts
and
culture
, it will encourage more tourists to visit our country, leading to an increase in the revenue. To illustrate, Rome
is known
for its
art
and
culture
, it is one of the main reasons why it is a popular destination for the visit of tourists.
However
, for a
developing country
, the
government
should focus on providing proper
sanitation
and
infrastructure
facilities for its citizens. This means the
government
will need funds that would
help
in improving the
sanitation
levels and
also
the
infrastructure
of the city. This would mean, there would be
very
less
funds which could
be invested
in the
arts
. Better
sanitation
conditions can result in reducing the diseases and
good
infrastructure
will
improve
the trades and the daily commuting in the nation.
To conclude
,
some
portion of the money should to spend on
arts
and
culture
which will
help
in preserving our heritage and
also
generating more revenue from tourism,
however
the
government
should
first
look at improving the
sanitation
and
infrastructure
levels in the country.
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27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes