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The figures give information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories v.1

The figures give information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories v. 1
BEING SUCCESSFUL IS NOT EVERYBODY'S BUSINESS. THERE IS PERCEPTION PERVAILENT IN THE SOCIETY THAT THE SUCCESS OF AN INDIVIDUAL DEPENDS UPON HOW ONE IS BEING NURTURED BY HIS FAMILY THROUGHOUT THE CRUCIAL PERIOD OF LIFE. I AM IN COMPLETE AGREEMENT WITH THIS NOTION BECAUSE AS PER MY OPINION PROMINENT TRAITS REQUIRED FOR BEING SUCCESSFUL OUGHT TO BE IMBIBED IN A PERSON BY ONE'S CLOSE RELATIONS. TO EMBARK ON, ADMITTEDLY, VICTORY OF A PERSON DEPENDS PROMINENTLY UPON THE ENVIRONMENT WHICH IS OFFERED AT HOME. CONDUCTIVE AMBIENCE FOR STUDIES AS WELL AS WORK NOT ONLY FOCUS THE ENRGY IN RIGHT DIRECTION BUT ALSO ASSISTS TO DEVELOP HIGHER LEVEL CONCENTRATION, LEADING TO FATHOMLESS POSITIVE REULTS BY JUST PUTTING LIMITED EFFORTS. WHAT IS MORE, SUPPORTIVE PARENTS ARE LIKE PILLARS WHO ALWAYS STAND BY WITH THEIR CHILDREN IN EVERY SITUATION, AND INDUCING CONTINUOUS PROGRESSIVE FEEDBACK, WHICH IS SUPPORTED BY THE ARTICLE PUBLISHED BY DR. SIGMUND FREUD IN HIS BOOK ON STUDY OF HUMAN PSYCHOLOGY IN 1925, BY STATING THAT FAMILY SUPPORT CAN BREATHE NEW LIFE IN AN INDIVIDUAL, AS A RESULT SHOWING THE PATHWAY TO NEW HIGHTS. PROBING FURTHER, SUCCESS DEMANDS PLETHORA OF PERSONALITY TRAITS, THOSE ARE ALSO IMBIBED BY THE FAMILY. LEARNING MYRIAD QUALITIES FROM MEMBER SUCH AS COOPERATION FROM SIBLINS BY SHARING TOYS AND OTHER BELONGINGS, RELENTLESS WORKING HABITS FROM FATHER, WHO EARN FOR THE WHOLE FAMILY WITHOUT BEING TAKING CARE OF HIMSELF, BEING CALM AND CHEERFUL FROM MOTHER, WHO FULFILL EVERYONE'S DEMANDS AND LASTLY SPREADING KNOWLEDGR FROM GRSNDPSRENTS WHO ARE THE STORE HOUSE OF EXPERIENCES. AS A RESULT, GROWING UNDER THE SHADOW OF SUCH PERSONALITIES IS SEEMS A VIABLE SOURSE OF INCULCATING BALANCED PERSONALITY HABITS REQUIRED FOR BECOMING SUCCESSFUL. IN CONCLUSION, LOOKING AT THE DELIBERATIONS, IT CAN BE CATEGORICALLY ESTABLISHED THAT FAMILYMEMBERS ARE AN IMPERATIVE PART OF AN INDIVIDUAL'S LIFE, PRESENCE OF WHOSE HAND HOLDING CAN WORK WONDERS.
BEING SUCCESSFUL IS NOT EVERYBODY'S BUSINESS. THERE IS PERCEPTION
PERVAILENT
IN THE SOCIETY THAT THE SUCCESS OF AN INDIVIDUAL DEPENDS UPON HOW ONE IS
BEING NURTURED
BY HIS
FAMILY
THROUGHOUT THE CRUCIAL PERIOD OF LIFE. I AM IN COMPLETE AGREEMENT WITH THIS NOTION
BECAUSE
AS PER MY OPINION PROMINENT TRAITS REQUIRED FOR BEING SUCCESSFUL OUGHT TO
BE IMBIBED
IN A PERSON BY ONE'S CLOSE RELATIONS.

TO EMBARK ON,
ADMITTEDLY
, VICTORY OF A PERSON DEPENDS
PROMINENTLY
UPON THE ENVIRONMENT WHICH
IS OFFERED
AT HOME. CONDUCTIVE AMBIENCE FOR STUDIES
AS WELL
AS WORK NOT
ONLY
FOCUS THE
ENRGY
IN RIGHT DIRECTION
BUT
ALSO
ASSISTS TO DEVELOP HIGHER LEVEL CONCENTRATION, LEADING TO FATHOMLESS
POSITIVE
REULTS
BY
JUST
PUTTING LIMITED EFFORTS.
WHAT IS MORE
, SUPPORTIVE PARENTS ARE LIKE PILLARS
WHO
ALWAYS STAND BY WITH THEIR CHILDREN IN EVERY SITUATION, AND INDUCING CONTINUOUS PROGRESSIVE FEEDBACK, WHICH
IS SUPPORTED
BY THE ARTICLE PUBLISHED BY DR. SIGMUND FREUD IN HIS BOOK ON STUDY OF HUMAN PSYCHOLOGY IN 1925, BY STATING THAT
FAMILY
SUPPORT CAN BREATHE NEW LIFE IN AN INDIVIDUAL,
AS A RESULT
SHOWING THE PATHWAY TO NEW
HIGHTS
.

PROBING
FURTHER
, SUCCESS DEMANDS PLETHORA OF PERSONALITY TRAITS, THOSE ARE
ALSO
IMBIBED BY THE
FAMILY
. LEARNING MYRIAD QUALITIES FROM MEMBER SUCH AS COOPERATION FROM
SIBLINS
BY SHARING TOYS AND OTHER BELONGINGS, RELENTLESS WORKING HABITS FROM FATHER,
WHO
EARN FOR THE WHOLE
FAMILY
WITHOUT BEING TAKING CARE OF HIMSELF, BEING CALM AND CHEERFUL FROM MOTHER,
WHO
FULFILL EVERYONE'S DEMANDS AND
LASTLY
SPREADING
KNOWLEDGR
FROM
GRSNDPSRENTS
WHO
ARE THE STORE
HOUSE
OF EXPERIENCES.
AS A RESULT
, GROWING UNDER THE SHADOW OF SUCH PERSONALITIES IS SEEMS A VIABLE
SOURSE
OF INCULCATING BALANCED PERSONALITY HABITS REQUIRED FOR BECOMING SUCCESSFUL.

IN CONCLUSION
, LOOKING AT THE DELIBERATIONS, IT CAN BE
CATEGORICALLY
ESTABLISHED THAT
FAMILYMEMBERS
ARE AN IMPERATIVE PART OF AN INDIVIDUAL'S LIFE, PRESENCE OF WHOSE HAND HOLDING CAN WORK WONDERS.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The figures give information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
306 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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