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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. v.8

The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. v. 8
The research, investigation and usage of an alternative of crude oil and its by-products is considered to be given the most important world attention nowadays. In my opinion, I agree that exploration and research on alternatives to fossil fuels should be a targeted goal for the world because it will solve many problems and reduce quite a good number of environmental issues. It is obvious that efforts made by the human being to explore and advance their surrounding have also caused major problems such as water, air and environmental pollution. An excessive amount of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere has dramatically affected the ozone layer, which is supposed to protect human habitat. The fossil fuel is damaging the environment in an unbelievable pace and many world leaders have already agreed that the use of fossil fuels should be controlled to save the environment. Now the question arises how much importance it should get? As it is related to the very existence of the mother planet – Earth, and a global problem, without any doubt it should be given a global priority. If not, after few decades it would be too late to control the catastrophic consequences. To urgently tackle this problem, world leaders from different countries should sit together and agree to policies that all countries in the world would follow. This meeting should be done as soon as possible. It is also important that some major safe alternatives like solar power, biogas, green energy etc. should be widely used and the government should encourage people to use it. In addition, the climate issue involves all nations of the world and the fatal effects will affect the every single of them. That is why it is imperative that global attention and sponsorship are given by the governments of different countries and international bodies to conduct the research, to invent a safe alternative to the fossil fuel immediately. In conclusion, it is very important that governments of numerous countries set aside a robust financial plan and policy paralleled to the exploration of green energy in order to combat anticipated problem that may arise.
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alternative
of crude oil and its by-products
is considered
to be
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given
the most
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important
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world
attention nowadays. In my opinion, I
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agree
that exploration and research on
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alternatives
to
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fossil
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fuels
should be a targeted goal for the
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world
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because
it will solve
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many
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problems
and
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reduce
quite a
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good
number of environmental issues.

It is obvious that efforts made by the human being to explore and advance their surrounding have
also
caused major
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problems
such as water, air and environmental pollution. An excessive amount of carbon dioxide released into the atmosphere has
dramatically
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affected
the ozone layer, which
is supposed
to protect human habitat. The
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fossil
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fuel
is damaging the environment in an unbelievable pace and
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many
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world
leaders have already
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agreed
that the
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use
of
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fossil
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fuels
should
be controlled
to save the environment.
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Now
the question arises how much importance it should
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get
? As it
is related
to the
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very
existence of the mother planet
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–
Earth, and a global
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problem
, without any doubt it should be
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given
a global priority. If not, after few decades it would be too late to control the catastrophic consequences.

To
urgently
tackle this
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problem
,
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world
leaders from
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different
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countries
should sit together and
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agree
to policies that all
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countries
in the
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world
would follow. This meeting should
be done
as
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soon
as possible. It is
also
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important
that
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some
major safe
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alternatives
like solar power, biogas, green energy etc. should be
widely
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used
and the
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government
should encourage
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people
to
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use
it.
In addition
, the climate issue involves all nations of the
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world
and the fatal effects will affect the every single of them.
That is
why it is imperative that global attention and sponsorship are
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given
by the
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governments
of
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different
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countries
and international bodies to conduct the research, to invent a safe
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alternative
to the
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fossil
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fuel
immediately.

In conclusion
, it is
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very
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important
that
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governments
of numerous
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countries
set aside a robust financial plan and policy paralleled to the exploration of green energy in order to combat anticipated
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problem
that may arise.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
353 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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