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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor? v.6

Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor? v. 6
There has been a dramatic increase in poverty in some developing and underdeveloped countries over the last few years. This has affected large numbers of people and hiked up their woes. Illiteracy, unemployment, inflation and unstable economic conditions are few factors that have contributed immensely to poverty. However, people’s suffering could be mitigated by providing them health, education and job opportunities. It is often seen that people are reluctant to send their children to educational institutions in poor countries. These institutions could help them in educating and changing their destiny. Despite its benefits, people would like to indulge their children in some paid work, which could not help significantly in altering their present conditions. Furthermore, due to uncertain circumstances of the country, there is a price hike of various basics items that are mandatory for daily life. Exorbitant prices of others goods and transportation also badly affected people financial matters. The government can play a pivotal role to eradicate poverty from society.   There should be attempts by the government to provide vocational training to poor people. That will enable them to find a good job based on their skills. Moreover, there should be free education for poor peoples; these people should be awarded a scholarship for higher studies based on their lofty performances. To sum up, I would like to say that government should take preemptive measures to reduce poverty by giving them professional training and educational facilities. The state could also support financially to poor families if there is no one to provide basic amenities of life to them. It is also government duty to ensure that hapless people should not be deprived off from basic life necessities.
There has been a dramatic increase in
poverty
in
some
developing and underdeveloped countries over the last few years. This has
affected
large numbers of
people
and hiked up their woes. Illiteracy, unemployment, inflation and unstable economic conditions are few factors that have contributed
immensely
to
poverty
.
However
,
people’s
suffering could
be mitigated
by providing them health, education and job opportunities.

It is
often
seen
that
people
are reluctant to
send
their children to educational institutions in
poor
countries. These institutions could
help
them in educating and changing their destiny. Despite its benefits,
people
would like to indulge their children in
some
paid work, which could not
help
significantly
in altering their present conditions.
Furthermore
, due to uncertain circumstances of the country, there is a price hike of various basics items that are mandatory for daily life. Exorbitant prices of others
goods
and transportation
also
badly
affected
people
financial matters.

The
government
can play a pivotal role to eradicate
poverty
from society.
 
There should be attempts by the
government
to provide vocational training to
poor
people
. That will enable them to find a
good
job based on their
skills
.
Moreover
, there should be free education for
poor
peoples
; these
people
should
be awarded
a scholarship for higher studies based on their lofty performances.

To sum up, I would like to say that
government
should take preemptive measures to
reduce
poverty
by giving them professional training and educational facilities. The state could
also
support
financially
to
poor
families if there is no one to provide basic amenities of life to them. It is
also
government
duty to ensure that hapless
people
should not
be deprived
off from basic life necessities.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can we do to help the poor? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
280 words
6.0
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