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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. v.6

The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. v. 6
From the last few decades, people have been using fossil fuels such as charcoal, petrol, gas, and diesel as their main source of energy. With increasing global warming due to the greenhouse effect of these fossils fuels, people are getting more noticed about unsafe use of them. Some of them believe that a safe alternative source of energy should be searched urgently to save our planet. People use fossil fuel for various purposes such as using gas for cooking and in air conditioning, driving engines with petroleum and diesel in vehicles and factories. So, we have enjoyed uncountable profits by the use of fossil fuels. But it not only gives us benefits but also brings many adverse effects. The most terrible negative impact is its contribution to global warming. Carbon dioxide emission from burning of the fossil fuels makes air pollution and also damage of ozone layer of our atmosphere which usually protects us from dangerous UV rays from the sun. Without the ozone layer, more UV rays will fall on our planet making the world very hot and increasing the risk of skin cancer among the people. To prevent further damage of ozone layer, scientists and researchers are looking into other alternative sources of energy which are clean and safe. For example, Italy is famous for a widespread use of wind energy since several years ago. Japanese are using nuclear power which is very cheap and clean. But the amount of global use of clean energy is very much less compared to the use of fossil fuels. So, governments are mainly responsible for exploring more sources of clean energy and enforcing the people to use it by imposing regulations as well as by increasing the people awareness of negative impacts of fossil fuels. To conclude, as the global warming effects of fossil fuels is a highly challenging problem of our planet, increasing use of alternative clean and safe energy is urgently demanding to save our beautiful planet in healthy condition.
From the last few decades,
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people
have been using
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fossil
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fuels
such as charcoal, petrol, gas, and diesel as their main
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source
of
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energy
. With
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increasing
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global
warming due to the greenhouse effect of these
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fossils
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fuels
,
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people
are getting more noticed about unsafe
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use
of them.
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Some
of them believe that a safe alternative
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source
of
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energy
should
be searched
urgently
to save our planet.

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People
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use
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fossil
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fuel
for various purposes such as using gas for cooking and in air conditioning, driving engines with petroleum and diesel in vehicles and factories.
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So
, we have enjoyed uncountable profits by the
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use
of
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fossil
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fuels
.
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it not
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only
gives us benefits
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but
also
brings
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many
adverse effects. The most terrible
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negative
impact is its contribution to
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global
warming. Carbon dioxide emission from burning of the
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fossil
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fuels
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makes
air pollution and
also
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damage of
ozone layer of our atmosphere which
usually
protects us from
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dangerous
UV rays from the sun. Without the ozone layer, more UV rays will fall on our planet making the world
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very
hot and
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increasing
the
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risk
of skin cancer among the
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people
.

To
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prevent
further
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damage of
ozone layer, scientists and researchers are looking into other alternative
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sources
of
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energy
which are
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clean
and safe.
For example
, Italy is
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famous
for a widespread
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use
of wind
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energy
since several years ago. Japanese are using nuclear power which is
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very
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cheap
and
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clean
.
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But
the amount of
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global
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use
of
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clean
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energy
is
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very
much less compared to the
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use
of
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fossil
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fuels
.
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So
,
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governments
are
mainly
responsible for exploring more
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sources
of
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clean
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energy
and enforcing the
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people
to
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use
it by imposing regulations
as well
as by
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increasing
the
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people
awareness of
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negative
impacts of
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fossil
fuels.

To conclude
, as the
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global
warming effects of
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fossil
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fuels
is a
highly
challenging problem of our planet,
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increasing
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use
of alternative
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clean
and safe
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energy
is
urgently
demanding to save our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
planet in healthy condition.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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