In the past decade, there has been a huge rise in the number of smokers. People are opting this habit really quickly, some believe smoking to be stress buster and some just do it as a fashion trend. But whatsoever these people are choosing this habit out of their free will and they are well aware of the dangers involved with it. This has lead to an ongoing debate about whether smokers should pay extra for their medical treatment or not. Well, I agree that they should pay more. This essay will discuss some of the reasons for my agreement.
Firstly, the most important factor for implementing expensive medical treatment for smokers is that by doing so some of them may quit smoking due to money issues. For instance, there are many people who do it just to show off, with an increase in hospitalization expenditures they will surely prefer to leave this fashion. Secondly, when smoking both active and passive smokers are getting affected. The active smoker is doing it intentionally, but the person standing next to him may not even like that. Thus, while smoking they are not only harming themselves, but also affecting other people.
Another main reason is that smokers are adopting this habit at the cost of inheriting many linked diseases. If they are willing to accept all the disadvantages than they can also pay a little more. At the end, they will have to choose between the two. Lastly, by sparing some money from people who are intentionally accepting diseases, government can utilize it for the needy and poor who are innocents and deserve basic medical treatments.
To conclude, if smokers choose smoking over hospital expenses, then that's their choice to make and they can also afford to pay high. But, if there are some who are willing to choose their health than government should provide them with cheap rehabilitation centres to help them.
In the past decade, there has been a huge rise in the number of smokers.
People
are opting this habit
really
quickly
,
some
believe
smoking
to be
stress
buster and
some
just
do it as a fashion trend.
But
whatsoever these
people
are choosing this habit out of their free
will and
they are well aware of the
dangers
involved with it. This has lead to an ongoing debate about whether smokers should
pay
extra for their medical treatment or not. Well, I
agree
that they should
pay
more. This essay will discuss
some of the
reasons for my agreement.
Firstly
, the most
important
factor for implementing expensive medical treatment for smokers is that by doing
so
some
of them may quit
smoking
due to money issues.
For instance
, there are
many
people
who
do it
just
to
show
off, with an increase in hospitalization expenditures they will
surely
prefer to
leave
this fashion.
Secondly
, when
smoking
both active and passive smokers are getting
affected
. The active smoker is doing it
intentionally
,
but
the person standing
next
to him may not even like that.
Thus
, while
smoking
they are not
only
harming themselves,
but
also
affecting other
people
.
Another main reason is that smokers are adopting this habit at the cost of inheriting
many
linked diseases.
If
they are willing to accept all the disadvantages than they can
also
pay
a
little
more. At the
end
, they will
have to
choose between the two.
Lastly
, by sparing
some
money from
people
who
are
intentionally
accepting diseases,
government
can utilize it for the needy and poor
who
are innocents and deserve basic medical treatments.
To conclude
, if smokers choose
smoking
over hospital expenses, then that's their choice to
make and
they can
also
afford to
pay
high.
But
, if there are
some
who
are willing to choose their health than
government
should provide them with
cheap
rehabilitation
centres
to
help
them.
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