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The diagram below illustrates how glass is recycled Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mak Connlparills whiere relevant v. 1
Education is a fundamental human right and people must not consider as an item for bragging. Therefore, the sort of people must have a same opportunity to learn something new by free education regardless of people wealthy. Overall, free education is a controversial issue among different countries and cultures. However, I completely believe that free education is the important part of human right that can help people in different fields. Some people, especially in underdeveloped countries and even inner city areas in developing countries feel that education means westernization and local culture can be lost by that. However, I think a close connection can be made between education and local culture. In fact, governments should provide the condition for having access to innovative and interesting educational program which treat every culture with respect. Therefore, the flow ideas and information can improve local culture. On the other hand, education is a valuable opportunity for people which can get internationally recognised degree and so be able to improve their chance of getting a good job. Also, education helps people to have a better understanding about current affairs around the world and they are not misled by wrong statistics and various lying. Hence, free education is one of the vital needs for living in this world. What is more, non-governmental organisation should consider having access people to free and reliable education. In conclusion, free education is a vital demand for humans and it must be considered as a fundamental human right that all of the people regardless their race and income must have access in a same opportunity.
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is a fundamental
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human
right and
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people
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must
not consider as an item for bragging.
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, the sort of
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people
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must
have a same opportunity to learn something new by
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free
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education
regardless of
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people
wealthy.
Overall
,
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free
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education
is a controversial issue among
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different
countries and
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cultures
.
However
, I completely believe that
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free
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education
is the
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important
part of
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human
right that can
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help
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people
in
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different
fields.

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Some
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people
,
especially
in underdeveloped countries and even inner city areas in
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developing countries
feel that
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education
means
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westernization
and local
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culture
can
be lost
by that.
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, I
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a close connection can
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between
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education
and local
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culture
. In fact,
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governments
should provide the condition for having access to innovative and interesting educational program which treat every
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culture
with respect.
Therefore
, the flow
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ideas
and information can
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improve
local culture.

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,
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education
is a valuable opportunity for
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people
which can
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get
internationally
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recognised
degree and
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so
be able to
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improve
their chance of getting a
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good
job.
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,
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education
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helps
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people
to have a better understanding about
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current
affairs around the
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world and
they are not misled by
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wrong
statistics and various lying.
Hence
,
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free
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education
is one of the vital needs for living in this world.
What is more
, non-governmental
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organisation
should consider having access
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people
to
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free
and reliable education.

In conclusion
,
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free
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education
is a vital demand for
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humans
and it
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must
be considered
as a fundamental
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human
right that
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all of the
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people
regardless their race and income
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must
have access in a same opportunity.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay The diagram below illustrates how glass is recycled Summarie the information by selecting and reporting the main features and mak Connlparills whiere relevant v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
265 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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