Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world. v.6

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world. v. 6
There is no doubt the growth in the business of tourism has supported English to become the most powerful language in the world. While there are many benefits to English emerging as the only language accepted globally, there are also some drawbacks to consider. In this essay, I will discuss both the views. On the one hand, if English is accepted as the solitary language worldwide, no language barriers would be left between people. They will be able to communicate with ease all across the world. For example, a person well-spoken in French travels to another country, despite of not being familiar with the language used there, he will be able to communicate with other people in a hassle-free manner. Furthermore, this will lead to more socializations among people from different places. As a result, more interactions will be promoted. On the other hand, it would have a negative impact on the diverse cultures and languages. This is because there are multiple languages supported across world, and supremacy of one will affect the other one’s as the usage of others will reduce substantially. For instance, people belonging to a specific lingual would stop speaking much in the same, which would affect their mother tongue badly. Moreover, it will become mandatory for all people to learn English. As a consequence, it will rule as the dominant one among all other languages. In conclusion, although there are multiple pros of English rising as the globally accepted language, there are some cons which needs to be taken into consideration as well, because it can have a huge impact for all the existing languages in the world.
There is no doubt the growth in the business of tourism has supported English to become the most powerful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
. While there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
benefits to English emerging as the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
globally, there are
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
drawbacks to consider. In this essay, I will discuss both the views.

On the one hand, if English is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
as the solitary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
worldwide, no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
barriers would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
between
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
. They will be able to communicate with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
all across the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
.
For example
, a person well-spoken in French travels to another country,
Did you mean "despite" (or, alternatively, 'in spite of')?
despite of
not being familiar with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
there, he will be able to communicate with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in a hassle-free manner.
Furthermore
, this will lead to more
Possible spelling mistake found.
socializations
among
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
from
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
places.
As a result
, more interactions will
be promoted
.

On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, it would have a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
impact on the diverse cultures and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
there are multiple
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
supported across
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
, and supremacy of one will affect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
The possessive apostrophe seems to be incorrect. Please remove the apostrophe if you want to use the plural form of 'one'.
one’s
as the usage of others will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
substantially
.
For instance
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
belonging to a specific lingual would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
speaking much in the same, which would affect their mother tongue
badly
.
Moreover
, it will become mandatory for all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to learn English. As a consequence, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
as the dominant one among all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
languages.

In conclusion
, although there are multiple pros of English rising as the globally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
accepted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
language
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cons which needs to
be taken
into consideration
as well
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it can have a huge impact for all the existing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
world
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
22Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts