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The college years are the best time in person's life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion. v.1

The college years are the best time in person's life. Give reasons to support your opinion. v. 1
IUT IS THE TODAYS'S FACT THAT, PEOPLE ARE BEING MORE AND MORE SELFCENTERED AND LOSSING THEIR CONCERN ABOUT OTHER THINGS LIKE ENVIRONMENT, NEEDY PEOPLE. THUS, IT IS NECESSARY TO TEACH THE NEW GENERATION ABOUT THE REALITY OF THE WORLD AND THE OWN'S COUNTRY BY MAKING SOME VOLUNTEERING WORK FOR THE COMMUNITY AS A REQUIREMENT TO PASS SECONDARY SCHOOL COURSE. THIS ESSAY WILL TOTALLY CONCURE WITH THE ABOVE STATEMENT BY GIVING THE PRIME REASON OF THE BENEFIT OF THIS APPROACH WITH DETAIL EXPLANATION AND RELEVENT EXAMPLE. THE PRIME REASON IS THAT, IT WILL INCREASE THE INTEREST IN YOUGH TO DO SOMETHING GOOD FOR THE SOCIETY AFTER SEEING THE REAL VIEWS OF IT. TO ELABORATE, WHEN STUDENTS ARE TAKE OUT ON SOME MEDICAL CAMPS, PRORGRAMM LIKE TREE PLABNTING ETC, WILL MAKE THEM AWARE OF THE TODAY'S CONCERN FOR NATURE AS WELL AS ANIMALS AND INDIVIDUALS. THIS IS HOW THEY DEVELOP A CURIOSITY TO ASSET THEM IN ANYWAYS THEY CAN. FOR AN EXAMPLE, SOCIALERVICE DEPARTMENT OF AN INDIA CONDUCTED A VARIOUS SURVEY ON PEOPLE WHO TOOK PART IN SOME OF THE VPUNTEERING WORKS DURING THIR STUDIES AND THAT SHOWS REVEALS THAT MOST OF ALL THAT PUPIL ARE CURRENTLY IN THE FIELD WHERE THEY CAN GIVE THEIR SOME CONTIBUTION TOWARDS THE COMMUNITY. THIS IS DUE TO THE COMMUNITY SERVICIES THEY DID IN THE HIGH SCHOOL INFLUENCE THEM TO CHOOSE THE STREAM. HOWEVER, THERE ARE ONE OR TWO DISADVANTAGE OF MAKING PUBLIC SERVICE MANDATORY LIKE, STUDENT MIGHT BECOME OUT FOCUS FROM THEIR ACTUAL STUDY BY DOING IT. TO ILLUSTARTE, SOME WEAK STUDENT MAY BECOME DEPRESSED AFTER FACING THE PEOPLE'S SITUATIO AND THEY START IMAGINE THEIR OWN LIFE INSTEAD OF THE FOLK'S PLACE. AS A RESULT THEY MIGHT END UP LEAVE THE COURSE. BUT THIS WILL HAPPENS IN THE MARELY CASES. SO THAT IS WHY AS FAR AS I CAN SEE, IT DOES NOT AFFCET THE STUDENTS IN ANYWAY. TO SUM UP, OVERALL IT IS PROOVEN AS BENEFICIAS FOR THE ONS-SELF, NATURE AND NATION AS WELL. AS THIS APPROACH WILL INCREASE THEY KNOWLEDGE AND GIVE THEM SATISFACTION AFTER SOME PUBLICE SERVICES.
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IUT
IS THE
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TODAYS
'S FACT THAT,
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PEOPLE
ARE BEING MORE AND MORE
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SELFCENTERED
AND
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LOSSING
THEIR CONCERN ABOUT OTHER THINGS LIKE ENVIRONMENT, NEEDY
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PEOPLE
.
THUS
, IT IS NECESSARY TO TEACH THE NEW GENERATION ABOUT THE REALITY OF THE WORLD AND THE
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OWN
'S COUNTRY BY MAKING
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SOME
VOLUNTEERING WORK FOR THE COMMUNITY AS A REQUIREMENT TO PASS SECONDARY SCHOOL COURSE. THIS ESSAY WILL
TOTALLY
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CONCURE
WITH THE ABOVE STATEMENT BY GIVING THE PRIME REASON OF THE BENEFIT OF THIS APPROACH WITH DETAIL EXPLANATION AND
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RELEVENT
EXAMPLE.

THE PRIME REASON IS THAT, IT WILL INCREASE THE INTEREST IN
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YOUGH
TO DO SOMETHING
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GOOD
FOR THE SOCIETY AFTER SEEING THE REAL VIEWS OF IT. TO ELABORATE, WHEN
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STUDENTS
ARE TAKE OUT ON
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SOME
MEDICAL CAMPS,
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PRORGRAMM
LIKE TREE
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PLABNTING
ETC, WILL
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MAKE
THEM AWARE OF THE
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TODAY
'S CONCERN FOR NATURE
AS WELL
AS ANIMALS AND INDIVIDUALS. THIS IS HOW THEY DEVELOP A CURIOSITY TO ASSET THEM IN ANYWAYS THEY CAN. FOR AN EXAMPLE,
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SOCIALERVICE
DEPARTMENT OF AN INDIA CONDUCTED A VARIOUS SURVEY ON
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PEOPLE
WHO
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TOOK PART
IN
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SOME OF THE
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VPUNTEERING
WORKS DURING
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THIR
STUDIES AND THAT
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SHOWS
REVEALS THAT MOST OF ALL
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THAT PUPIL ARE
CURRENTLY
IN THE FIELD WHERE THEY CAN GIVE THEIR
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SOME
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CONTIBUTION
TOWARDS THE COMMUNITY. THIS IS DUE TO THE COMMUNITY
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SERVICIES
THEY DID IN THE HIGH SCHOOL INFLUENCE THEM TO CHOOSE THE STREAM.

HOWEVER
, THERE ARE ONE OR TWO DISADVANTAGE OF MAKING PUBLIC SERVICE MANDATORY LIKE,
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STUDENT
MIGHT BECOME OUT FOCUS FROM THEIR ACTUAL STUDY BY DOING IT. TO
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ILLUSTARTE
,
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SOME
WEAK
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STUDENT
MAY BECOME DEPRESSED AFTER FACING THE
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PEOPLE
'S
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SITUATIO
AND THEY
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START
IMAGINE THEIR
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OWN
LIFE
INSTEAD
OF THE FOLK'S PLACE.
AS A RESULT
THEY MIGHT
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END
UP
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LEAVE
THE COURSE.
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BUT
THIS WILL HAPPENS IN THE
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MARELY
CASES.
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SO
THAT IS
WHY AS FAR AS I CAN
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SEE
, IT DOES NOT
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AFFCET
THE
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STUDENTS
Did you mean "in any way"?
IN ANYWAY
.

TO SUM UP,
OVERALL
IT IS
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PROOVEN
AS
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BENEFICIAS
FOR THE ONS-SELF, NATURE AND NATION
AS WELL
. AS THIS APPROACH WILL INCREASE
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THEY KNOWLEDGE
AND GIVE THEM SATISFACTION AFTER
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SOME
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PUBLICE
SERVICES.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay The college years are the best time in person's life. Give reasons to support your opinion. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
345 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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