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q1 Where Is A Good Place To Have Fun In Your City Or Town? Describe This Place And Explain Why It Is Fun. v.1

q1 Where Is A Good Place To Have Fun In Your City Or Town? Describe This Place And Explain Why It Is Fun. v. 1
It is undeniable that fossil fuels such as coal and gases are the primary resources of energy. However, a few countries are promoting the use of other resources, for example, solar or wind energy. In my opinion, changing energy sources are highly positive to reduce environmental effects and reusing energy supplies. There are several reasons using solar energy instead of charcoals is beneficial. The first and most important is the environmental effects. Coals and gases impact the environment detrimentally, and the quality of air is also degraded. By using solar energy, air pollution will be reduced to a certain level. For example, in the Netherlands, the government provided a subsidy for solar plants because the city was under threat of pollution due to excessive use of gases. Thus, encouraging the use of natural resources is always beneficial for the environment and public. Another reason, the use of wind energy is helpful is that it is reusable. One can regenerate the energy from the residue of it. Because of its reusable nature, it is affordable and convenient. As a result, the saved money from energy resources can be used in others much needed areas which can be helpful. To exemplify, Canada is promoting the use of solar or wind power because of its cost effectiveness feature and establishing the plants for these energies to get rid of coals and gases. In conclusion, however, there are multiple resources of energy such as wind power, solar energy, charcoals, gases, use of natural resources is always beneficial.
It is undeniable that fossil fuels such as coal and
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gases
are the primary resources of
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energy
.
However
, a few countries are promoting the
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use
of other resources,
for example
,
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solar
or
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wind
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energy
. In my opinion, changing
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energy
sources are
highly
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positive
to
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reduce
environmental effects and reusing
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energy
supplies.

There are several reasons using
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solar
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energy
instead
of charcoals is beneficial. The
first
and most
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important
is the environmental effects. Coals and
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gases
impact the environment
detrimentally
, and the quality of air is
also
degraded. By using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
solar
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energy
, air pollution will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
to a certain level.
For example
, in the Netherlands, the
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government
provided a subsidy for
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solar
plants
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because
the city was under threat of pollution due to excessive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
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gases
.
Thus
, encouraging the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of natural resources is always beneficial for the environment and public.

Another reason, the
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use
of
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wind
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energy
is helpful is that it is reusable. One can regenerate the
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energy
from the residue of it.
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Because
of its reusable nature, it is affordable and convenient.
As a result
, the saved money from
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energy
resources can be
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used
in others
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much needed
areas which can be helpful. To exemplify, Canada is promoting the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
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solar
or
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wind
power
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because
of its
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cost effectiveness
feature and establishing the plants for these
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energies
to
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get
rid of coals and gases.

In conclusion
,
however
, there are multiple resources of
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energy
such as
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wind
power,
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solar
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energy
, charcoals,
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gases
,
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use
of natural resources is always beneficial.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay q1 Where Is A Good Place To Have Fun In Your City Or Town? Describe This Place And Explain Why It Is Fun. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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