The internet is widely used by people of varied races, religion, and nationality are able to communicate with each other easily. But, some people believe that this technology prevents us from socializing and keeps us restricted. I strongly disagree with these thoughts, as the world wide web, allows us to be more socially active by providing us the facility of texting and sending multimedia. It has also made our work easier by providing us with services like video calling. Nevertheless, it comes with certain drawbacks like decreased creativity of children and spread of misinformation.
One of the main services given to us by the internet is sending text messages to any person living anywhere remote in the world just in a matter of seconds. This facility is useful in emergencies or natural disasters where a quick response is needed. For example, In the event of the tsunami in japan, many people were rescued just because they sent an alert to their emergency contacts and government authorities. To sum up, This use is very much beneficial for saving lives
Another important use of this is video calling. For example, many multinational companies use this method in conducting interviews for employment of people living abroad. Sending multimedia like photographs and videos for purposes like competitions, comparisons of growth, condition of a hotel or a restaurant is also possible, which is popularly used nowadays by online based companies.
To conclude, the world wide web is an effective tool for communicating and interacting. It also helps to ease the procedures of employment. The deleterious effects are those of limited child development and rise in falsehood. These issues can be tackled by governmental policies and parental monitoring.
The internet is
widely
used
by
people
of varied races, religion, and nationality are able to communicate with each other
easily
.
But
,
some
people
believe that this technology
prevents
us from socializing and
keeps
us restricted. I
strongly
disagree with these thoughts, as the
world wide web
,
allows
us to be more
socially
active by providing us the facility of texting and sending multimedia. It has
also
made our work easier by providing us with services like video calling.
Nevertheless
, it
comes
with certain drawbacks like decreased creativity of children and spread of misinformation.
One of the main services
given
to us by the internet is sending text messages to any person living anywhere remote in the world
just
in a matter of seconds. This facility is useful in emergencies or natural disasters where a quick response
is needed
.
For example
, In the
event
of the tsunami in japan,
many
people
were rescued
just
because
they
sent
an alert to their emergency contacts and
government
authorities. To sum up, This
use
is
very
much beneficial for saving
lives
Another
important
use
of this is video calling.
For example
,
many
multinational
companies
use
this method in conducting interviews for employment of
people
living abroad. Sending multimedia like photographs and videos for purposes like competitions, comparisons of growth, condition of a hotel or a restaurant is
also
possible, which is
popularly
used
nowadays by online based
companies
.
To conclude
, the
world wide web
is an effective tool for communicating and interacting. It
also
helps
to
ease
the procedures of employment. The deleterious effects are those of limited child development and rise in falsehood. These issues can
be tackled
by governmental policies and parental monitoring.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes