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The chart below shows the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. v.1

The chart below shows the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. v. 1
Taxes have always been a part of human existence, However, some citizens believe that they should be opted for giving part of their earnings to the state. I strongly disagree with this as I believe that patriotic individuals are supposed to be taxed. Perhaps, the most important reason why this levy should be paid is because these funds are required to build and maintain government utilities and infrastructures. We all make use of these facilities and as law abiding individuals, it becomes reasonable if we contribute by making payment as at when due. For example, without the revenue from taxation, a country will not be able to provide good roads, hospitals, libraries and other essential services and the members of the community daily make use of these. In addition to the point raised above, It is imperative to note that paying these dues to the authorities aid the effective redistribution of wealth, since not everybody in the society is well to do. Poor people in our neighbourhood can not afford food, shelter or send their children to school. They rely on a government stipend for support and to finance this system, our leaders will require revenue from taxing other members of the community. For instance, in the UK, there are benefits for the unemployed and free education is provided to people who are under 18 years old and sustaining this process depends on the proceeds from taxation. In a nutshell, it is clear that the importance of paying taxes cannot be overemphasized, as this is required to oil the wheel of good governance as well as help those who are vulnerable in our nation.
Taxes have always been a part of human existence,
However
,
some
citizens believe that they should
be opted
for giving part of their earnings to the state. I
strongly
disagree with this as I believe that patriotic individuals
are supposed
to
be taxed
.

Perhaps, the most
important
reason why this levy should
be paid
is
because
these funds
are required
to build and maintain
government
utilities and infrastructures. We all
make
use
of these facilities and as
law abiding
individuals, it becomes reasonable if we contribute by making payment as at when due.
For example
, without the revenue from taxation, a country will not be able to provide
good
roads, hospitals, libraries and other essential services and the members of the community daily
make
use
of these.

In addition
to the point raised above, It is imperative to note that paying these dues to the authorities aid the effective redistribution of wealth, since not everybody in the society is
well to do
. Poor
people
in our
neighbourhood
can not afford food, shelter or
send
their children to school. They rely on a
government
stipend for support and to finance this system, our leaders will require revenue from taxing other members of the community.
For instance
, in the UK, there are benefits for the unemployed and free education
is provided
to
people
who are under 18 years
old
and sustaining this process depends on the proceeds from taxation.

In a nutshell, it is
clear
that the importance of paying taxes cannot
be overemphasized
, as this
is required
to oil the wheel of
good
governance
as well
as
help
those who are vulnerable in our nation.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay The chart below shows the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
7.5
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