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The chart below illustrates the result of a survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005. v.2

The chart below illustrates the result of a survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005. v. 2
The bar graph demonstrate the various type of house result was liked by the individuals which who survey find by the British over the time period of 2005. Overall, what stand out from the graph is that while popularity of the Cambridge flats grow over the period in question, and that of detached houses remained high through out, the number of people depended on semi detached houses and is rapidly changed. Terraced houses, mean while, saw an increase followed by drop. With regard to terraced houses and semi detached houses, the starting figures of London roughly identical at 16 and 18 percent people' s respectively. However, where as the flats climbed in London and reached 58 percent. Before levelling off for the remainder of period, the Cambridge in detached house slipped to half this figure. Turning to the higher buildings, flats stayed consistently popular, with houses figure remaining between 58 and 8 percent throughout the period. Oxford terraced houses popularity was nearly as high as semi detached in Cambridge. With the number of houses rising 15 to 18 percent. finally than detached houses were dramatically changed after that it slightly grow up at reached at the 19 percent and as same as semi detached significantly swift.
The bar graph demonstrate the various type of
house
result
was liked
by the individuals which who survey find by the British over the time
period
of 2005.

Overall
, what stand out from the graph is that while popularity of the Cambridge flats grow over the
period
in question, and that of
detached
houses
remained high
through out
, the number of
people
depended on semi
detached
houses
and is
rapidly
changed
. Terraced
houses
,
mean while
,
saw
an increase followed by drop.

With regard to terraced
houses
and semi
detached
houses
, the starting figures of London roughly identical at 16 and 18
percent
people&
#039; s
respectively
.
However
,
where as
the flats climbed in London and reached 58
percent
.
Before
levelling off for the remainder of
period
, the Cambridge in
detached
house
slipped to half this figure.

Turning to the higher buildings, flats stayed
consistently
popular, with
houses
figure remaining between 58 and 8
percent
throughout the
period
. Oxford terraced
houses
popularity was
nearly
as high as semi
detached
in Cambridge. With the number of
houses
rising 15 to 18
percent
.
finally
than
detached
houses
were
dramatically
changed
after that it
slightly
grow up at reached at the 19
percent
and as same as semi
detached
significantly
swift.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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IELTS essay The chart below illustrates the result of a survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005. v. 2

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206 words
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