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Fossil fuels is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative source of energy is encouraged. To what extend do you think it is positive or negative development. v.2

Fossil fuels is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative source of energy is encouraged. v. 2
In the modern age it is true that fossil fuels is a major source of energy, but some other source of energy better than fossil fuels. Presenting my view i would intend to explore my views in upcoming paragraphs. One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that now a days life is impossible by the fossil fuel. This could be because of it used an in every field. In the thermo power plant burnt the coal is higher level by the purpose of heat. The most evident would be that car' s, motor vehicle are run by the help of fossil fuels. The further favourable aspect would be that in the field of railway electricity is produced by the help of diesel. The most visible would be that in agriculture field tractor is a basic need of every farmer and it run by help of fossil fuels. For instance, The recent survey findings have clearly indicated that there is common belief that 83 percent fossil fuels are used to produce the energy. However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of there is a current distressing situation that in the fossil fuel present the carbon when it burn and unburnt carbon polluted the atmospheric air. The most unfeavourable quality might be that when the diesel combustion in the vehicle it produced the noise pollution. The most successful way to confront this would be to solar power and wind power is the environment friendly source of the energy. The government should be make the rules to used solar power. Rules must be followed by the people. To conclusion, although there are good reason to use of alternative source of energy is encouraged, but in opinion solar power must be. encouraged by the government.
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fossil
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fuels
is a major
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source
of
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energy
,
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but
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some
other
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source
of
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energy
better than
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fossil
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fuels
. Presenting my view
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i
would intend to explore my views in upcoming paragraphs.

One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that
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now a days
life is impossible by the
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fossil
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fuel
. This could be
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because
of it
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used
an in every field. In the
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thermo
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power
plant burnt the coal is higher level by the purpose of heat. The most evident would be that
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car&
#039; s, motor vehicle
are run
by the
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help
of
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fossil
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fuels
. The
further
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favourable
aspect would be that in the field of railway electricity
is produced
by the
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help
of diesel.
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The
most visible would be that in agriculture field tractor is a basic need of every farmer and it
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run
by
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help
of
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fossil
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fuels
.
For instance
, The recent survey findings have
clearly
indicated that there is common belief that 83 percent
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fossil
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fuels
are
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used
to produce the energy.

However
, a
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definite
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actions
could be
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take
to mitigate of there is a
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current
distressing situation that in the
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fossil
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fuel
present the carbon when it
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burn
and
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unburnt
carbon polluted the atmospheric air. The most
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unfeavourable
quality might be that when the diesel combustion in the vehicle it produced the noise pollution. The most successful way to confront this would be to solar
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power
and wind
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power
is the environment friendly
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source
of the
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energy
.
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The
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government
should be
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make
the
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rules
to
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used
solar
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power
.
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Rules
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must
be followed
by the
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people
.

To conclusion, although there are
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good
reason to
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use
of alternative
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source
of
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energy
is encouraged
,
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but
in opinion solar
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power
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must
be. encouraged by the
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government
.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS essay Fossil fuels is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative source of energy is encouraged. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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