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Government should free the fees ogmf university. It is a valuable improvement. Do you agree or disagree. v.1

Government should free the fees ogmf university. It is a valuable improvement. v. 1
One of the most debatable issue today relates to that university education is provided by the government free of cost to all the students. presenting my view it is a further development of our country. I would intend to explore my view in following paragraphs. On one side of the argument that there are people who argue that it is a valuable development and boon which are provided by the government considerably out weigh it' s disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that higher education is so much costly. so this aprochment reduce illustration. The first chief cause might be that the economical burden on the parents. This could be because of students can be easily stuyding in the university. Moreover, students are more likely to learn their intrusting subjects. As a consequence, Students have to realise their responsibility for our country and are more likely to do social work. For instance, Dr Rajinder parshad was studying in school free of cost. After study completion they did 5 year social work and 1st president of India. On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argue that some students think that education is free for me and they never show the sympathy toward the study and some drawbacks of this apprrochment. However, high cost of teacher' s salary is paid by the government which is more effective to the money of country. ' Some famalies' are capable of paying the cost of students fees. Such as, Some students take the extra money to the parents and consume in the illegal way to purchase the alcohol and drug and uesd it. To conclusion, although there are good reason to government pay the cost of higher education of students. But in opinion it is a effective way to reduce the illustration in the country.
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today
relates to that university
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education
is provided
by the
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government
free of
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cost
to all the
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students
.
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presenting
my view it is a
further
development of our
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country
. I would intend to explore my view in following paragraphs.

On one side of the argument that there are
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people
who argue that it is a valuable development and boon which
are provided
by the
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government
considerably
out weigh
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it&
#039; s disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that higher
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education
is
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so
much costly.
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so
this
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aprochment
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reduce
illustration. The
first
chief cause might be that the economical burden on the parents. This could be
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because
of
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students
can be
easily
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stuyding
in the university.
Moreover
,
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students
are more likely to learn their
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intrusting
subjects. As a consequence,
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Students
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realise
their responsibility for our
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country
and are more likely to do social work.
For instance
, Dr
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Rajinder
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parshad
was studying in school free of
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cost
. After study completion they did 5 year social work and 1st president of India.

On the other hand
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also
possible to
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the opposing case. It is
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argue that
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some
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students
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think
that
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education
is free for
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me and
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show
the sympathy toward the study and
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drawbacks of this
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apprrochment
.
However
, high
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cost
of
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teacher&
#039; s salary
is paid
by the
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government
which is more effective to the money of
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country
. '
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Some
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famalies&
#039; are capable of paying the
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cost
of
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students
fees. Such as,
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Some
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students
take the extra money to the parents and consume in the illegal way to
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purchase
the alcohol and drug and
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uesd
it.

To conclusion, although there are
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good
reason to
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government
pay the
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cost
of higher
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education
of
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students
.
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But
in opinion it is
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a
effective way to
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reduce
the illustration in the
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country
.
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IELTS essay Government should free the fees ogmf university. It is a valuable improvement. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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