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Today, some food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only eat locally produced food. To what extent do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages? v.1

Today, some food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only eat locally produced food. v. 1
One of the most debatable issue today relates to some individuals think if eat the locally produced food it is better for environment. Presenting my view I would intend to explore aforementioned view in following paragraphs. On one side of the argument that the people who argue that locally produced food better for economy considerably outweigh it' s disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that it is obviously Favourable because if the people purchase food from to food travel so it tend to be increase the economical burden on the people. The most evident would be that if a country a product and sold by same country as a consequence it is best for their development and higher rank in countries. For instance, the recent survey findings and clear that now a days Japan became more fame because they sale the product same country. However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of if the food are purchased by the food travelers so there are couple of shortcomings. The most unfeavourable quality might be that higher cost of tax paid by the government to purchase the outside country food. Another stumbling block might be that if the country grain cannot sold by the local individual rather than it directly impacted on the local farmers and it is difficult to pay the highest cost of the pesticides and fertilizers where as farmers have got many issues to regard this problem they how to complete the cost of crop. To conclusion, although there are good reason to purchase the outside country food. But opinion rules must be make by government to purchase the locally produced food.
One of the most debatable issue
today
relates to
some
individuals
think
if eat the
locally
produced
food
it is better for environment. Presenting my view I would intend to explore aforementioned view in following paragraphs.

On one side of the argument that the
people
who argue that
locally
produced
food
better for economy
considerably
outweigh
it&
#039; s disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is that it is
obviously
Favourable
because
if the
people
purchase
food
from to
food
travel
so
it
tend
to be increase the economical burden on the
people
. The most evident would be that if a
country
a product and sold by same
country
as a consequence it is best for their development and higher rank in
countries
.
For instance
, the recent survey findings and
clear
that
now a days
Japan became more fame
because
they sale
the product same country.

However
, a
definite
actions
could be
take
to mitigate of if the
food
are
purchased
by the
food
travelers
so
there are
couple of
shortcomings. The most
unfeavourable
quality might be that higher cost of tax paid by the
government
to
purchase
the outside
country
food
. Another stumbling block might be that if the
country
grain cannot
sold
by the local individual
rather
than it
directly
impacted on the local farmers and it is difficult to pay the highest cost of the pesticides and fertilizers
where as
farmers have
got
many
issues to regard this problem they how to complete the cost of crop.

To conclusion, although there are
good
reason to
purchase
the outside
country
food
.
But
opinion
rules
must
be
make
by
government
to
purchase
the
locally
produced
food
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS essay Today, some food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. Some people think that it would be better to our environment and economy if people only eat locally produced food. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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