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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.5

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. v. 5
Physical activities are always very good to live fit. Every person who was playing any game is becoming healthier. Let us discuss the about this idea in detail in the following paragraphs. Games are the very good idea for people to live strong. In today’s life, it is very important for the whole society to play game. To encourage games, time to time world cup and the Olympic Games are conducting. Sometimes the prizes are also given to the winners so that more people will take part in the games. For example, I recently came to know about the Kabaddi Cup, which is being organized in the village very near to me. In that Kabaddi Cup the winner will be awarded with Cash Prize and one Motorcycle also. What I saw over there, too much gathering was there. So many sportsmen were there to take part in that Cup. I mean to say that by offering rewards to the sportsman organizers are gathering them. On the other hand, there are many more ideas to remain in shape. Yoga is the best techniques which are also very popular in these days. Almost every person is doing Yoga to become hale and hearty. Other so many techniques are also there like going for a walk in the morning or in the evening. Taking nutrition, food also helps us to become healthy. These are too much important. So, it is concluded that only sports are not enough to live strong. Other methods are also as important as these.
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for the whole society to play game. To encourage
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, time to time world
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and the Olympic
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are conducting.
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the prizes are
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, which is
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in the village
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near to me. In that
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the winner will
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over there, too much gathering was there.
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sportsmen were there to
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more
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to remain in shape. Yoga is the best techniques which are
also
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popular in these days. Almost every person is doing Yoga to become hale and hearty. Other
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so
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techniques are
also
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also
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helps
us to become healthy. These are too much
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.

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sports are not
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IELTS essay The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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