The over consumption of fossil fuel has become as a major topic of concern recently. Some people suggest that increasing the fuel rate can be the solution to cope with the environmental issues. Personally, I believe that other measures should also be given equal consideration.
Firstly, increasing the fuel expense cannot minimise the global dependence on fuel. It should be first noted that even when the bill of fuel increases significantly, people still cannot cut down the tremendous demand for petrol at once. For example, in daily life people still need to use their cars despite the fluctuation in petrol price. Another clear reason is that petrol is also intended for other applications in manufacturing industries and agricultural purposes. If the price of fuel increases, the national economy could suffer many unfavourable consequences.
When it comes to reducing the greenhouse gas emissions, some measures should be taken to mitigate the problems of over consuming gas. The most practical measure of the moment is to reduce the demand for resources in daily activities like travelling or production. This can be done by encouraging people to turn to mass-producing energy-efficient products like hybrid cars or implementing new energy saving technology in the manufacture. Besides, the most sustainable solution is to lower the reliance on fuel by taking advantage of alternative resources. Wind and tidal power in the Netherlands, nuclear power in Japan and solar power in the United States have all proven their efficiency in energy in energy production. These could be employed in other parts of the world to minimise the global dependence on fossil fuel.
As all existing data above shows that the only cutting down the fuel cost will not reduce the global warming effects. Some strong alternative measures need to be implemented to tackle this situation.
The over consumption of fossil
fuel
has become as a major topic of concern recently.
Some
people
suggest that increasing the
fuel
rate can be the solution to cope with the environmental issues.
Personally
, I believe that other
measures
should
also
be
given
equal consideration.
Firstly
, increasing the
fuel
expense cannot
minimise
the global dependence on
fuel
. It should be
first
noted that even when the bill of
fuel
increases
significantly
,
people
still
cannot
cut
down the tremendous demand for petrol at once.
For example
, in daily life
people
still
need to
use
their cars despite the fluctuation in petrol price. Another
clear
reason is that petrol is
also
intended for other applications in manufacturing industries and agricultural purposes. If the price of
fuel
increases, the national economy could suffer
many
unfavourable
consequences.
When it
comes
to reducing the greenhouse gas emissions,
some
measures
should
be taken
to mitigate the problems of over consuming gas. The most practical
measure
of the moment is to
reduce
the demand for resources in daily activities like travelling or production. This can
be done
by encouraging
people
to turn to mass-producing energy-efficient products like hybrid cars or implementing new energy saving technology in the manufacture.
Besides
, the most sustainable solution is to lower the reliance on
fuel
by taking advantage of alternative resources. Wind and tidal power in the Netherlands, nuclear power in Japan and solar power in the United States have all proven their efficiency
in energy in energy
production. These could
be employed
in other parts of the world to
minimise
the global dependence on fossil fuel.
As
all existing data above
shows
that the
only
cutting down the
fuel
cost will not
reduce
the global warming effects.
Some
strong alternative
measures
need to
be implemented
to tackle this situation.
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