Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge v.20
Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. 20
Education is an essential part of every children. However, in some nations in Europe few children from the age of 11 to 13 commutes to school to study more practical skills which assist them to obtain a job, others focus more on academics. I am of the opinion that, academic study is more vital than any other at school level.
According to European people, they think that children have been ready for further opportunities, as a result, they teach them real knowledge which help them in future jobs, to contradict it, I reckon this kind of study is essential but not at school age, where kids need more attention on academics. Besides, in school when they bestow more time in class study, then they will become a connoisseur in mathematics, science etc. Which plays an indispensable role when they will become a working professional.
I suggest, firstly, each school must focus on academic study only, as we found it is very important to them. Secondly, they can teach them vocational knowledge after 10th standard where children are fully educated with the basic skills. Conversely, if you try to teach both before 10th class, then the pupils may confuse with it. For example, my own son who is in 7th standard and I enrolled him to "machine learning" classes. As a consequence, with school and class study he is unable to focus either academics or extra classes.
To recapitulate, I repeat that providing practical knowledge about the job is required, but it needs a specific school level of children.
Education is an essential part of every
children
.
However
, in
some
nations in Europe few
children
from the age of 11 to 13 commutes to
school
to
study
more practical
skills
which assist them to obtain a job, others focus more on
academics
. I am of the opinion that,
academic
study
is more vital than any other at
school
level.
According to European
people
, they
think
that
children
have been ready for
further
opportunities,
as a result
, they teach them real knowledge which
help
them in future jobs, to contradict it, I reckon this kind of
study
is essential
but
not at
school
age, where kids need more attention on
academics
.
Besides
, in
school
when they bestow more time in
class
study
, then they will become a connoisseur in mathematics, science etc. Which plays an indispensable role when they will become a working professional.
I suggest,
firstly
, each
school
must
focus on
academic
study
only
, as we found it is
very
important
to them.
Secondly
, they can teach them vocational knowledge after 10th standard where
children
are
fully
educated with the basic
skills
.
Conversely
, if you try to teach both
before
10th
class
, then the pupils may confuse with it.
For example
, my
own
son who is in 7th standard and I enrolled him to
"
machine learning
"
classes
. As a consequence, with
school
and
class
study
he is unable to focus either
academics
or extra classes.
To recapitulate, I repeat that providing practical knowledge about the job
is required
,
but
it needs a specific
school
level of
children
.
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24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes