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The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent what you agree or disagree? v.6

The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. v. 6
That solutions should be implemented too protect environment has controversial. Several people believe that the most effective measure to tackle worldwide environmental degradation is to raise the cost of fossil fuels. I totally oppose to this view. To begin with, the consumption of fossil fuels does not depend completely on the price ones and fuel is not only reason for environmental problems. First and foremost, environmental issues does not stem from only fossil fuels but also other causes. For instance, the development of production process from industrial zones discharge a huge mount of greenhouse emission gases onto atmosphere. This makes global warming happens more rapidly and environment is threatened dramatically. Besides, environmental pollution is caused by residents' habits. For example, a bunch of people litter the streets instead of sorting and throwing garbage on the trash bin. In addition, discharging toxic waste onto the rivers and illegal logging and deforestation are also bad activities which make environment more polluted. In terms of solutions, there are some measures along with raising the cost of fuel to protect environment from pollution. One example for this method is that authority can fine heavily such as a mount of money to companies which discharge emission onto the land, water and air. Moreover, habitants' awareness about environmental problems need to be raised. In detailed, civilians can reduce the environment pollution by practical activities. Due to the fact that global warming derived from electricity, people can contributing on declining greenhouse emission gases by turning off the light bulbs in unnecessary cases or spending more eco-friendly devices. In conclusion, increasing the price of fossil fuels is only small part in campaign to protect environment. Both government and individuals should make efforts and implement other solutions at collective level to reduce global environmental pollution.
That solutions should
be implemented
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too protect
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environment
has controversial. Several
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people
believe that the most effective measure to tackle worldwide
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environmental
degradation is to raise the cost of
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fossil
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fuels
. I
totally
oppose to this view.

To
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begin
with, the consumption of
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fossil
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fuels
does not depend completely on the price ones and
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fuel
is not
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only
reason for
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environmental
problems.
First
and foremost,
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environmental
issues does not stem from
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only
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fossil
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fuels
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but
also
other causes.
For instance
, the development of production process from industrial zones discharge a huge mount of greenhouse emission gases onto atmosphere. This
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makes
global warming happens more
rapidly
and
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environment
is threatened
dramatically
.
Besides
,
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environmental
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pollution
is caused
by
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residents&
#039; habits.
For example
, a bunch of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
litter the streets
instead
of sorting and throwing garbage on the trash bin.
In addition
, discharging toxic waste onto the rivers and illegal logging and deforestation are
also
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bad
activities which
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make
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environment
more polluted.

In terms of solutions, there are
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some
measures along with raising the cost of
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fuel
to protect
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environment
from
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pollution
. One example for this method is that authority can fine
heavily
such as a mount of money to
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companies
which discharge emission onto the land, water and air.
Moreover
,
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habitants&
#039; awareness about
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environmental
problems need to
be raised
. In detailed, civilians can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
by practical activities. Due to the fact that global warming derived from electricity,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can contributing on declining greenhouse emission gases by turning off the light bulbs in unnecessary cases or spending more eco-friendly devices.

In conclusion
, increasing the price of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fossil
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fuels
is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
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small
part in campaign to protect
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environment
. Both
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government
and individuals should
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make
efforts and implement other solutions at collective level to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
global
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environmental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
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IELTS essay The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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