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The best way to solve environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

The best way to solve environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. with this statement? v. 1
The frequent use of fuel in automobiles, factories and aircrafts have caused so much damage in our environment today. It is a debated issue whether the increase in the price of petrol and diesel will curb this environmental pollution we are faced with. This may help to some extent but I disagree that increasing fuel price is not the best option to reduce environmental pollution. In recent times most cities are face with heavy traffic congestion, reason because cars are purchased by everyone as it used as a show of affluence. Raising the price of fuel will affect the lower class of people in the society as they may feel hurt. The best way to curb the issue of traffic on the road is to introduce a tax system on every car owner. This in turn will reduce the number of car owners and prospective car owners. Also, encouraging individuals to use public transport by maintaining a good transport system as this reduces traffic on the road. For instance, if the railways and undergrounds are in good shape, even the rich will want to use it thus reducing the amount of carbon dioxide emitted daily. Furthermore, nowadays automobile companies are beginning to invent cars that do not use fuel or diesel as thier source of energy rather makes use of solar powered and electricity powered cars. This inventory is major step to save the environment and reduce depletion in the atmosphere. Secondly, cars and planes with engines that consume less amount of fuel can equally help to curb environmental pollution. Finally, industries should handle the disposal of waste properly to reduce pollution with unhealthy gases in the environment. In conclusion, I pen down saying the cost of fuel is not the only measure to reduce pollution, as such action will affect the consumer and the economy as a whole. Other measure mentioned above like the use of solar and cell powered cars, use of public transportation can help solve this problem.
The frequent
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use
of
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fuel
in automobiles, factories and
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aircrafts have
caused
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so
much damage in our environment
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today
. It is a debated issue whether the increase in the price of petrol and diesel will curb this environmental
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pollution
we
are faced
with. This may
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help
to
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some
extent
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but
I disagree that increasing
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fuel
price is not the best option to
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reduce
environmental pollution.

In recent times most cities are face with heavy traffic congestion, reason
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because
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cars
are
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purchased
by everyone as it
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used
as a
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show
of affluence. Raising the price of
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fuel
will affect the lower
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class
of
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people
in the society as they may feel hurt. The best way to curb the issue of traffic on the road is to introduce a tax system on every
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car
owner. This in turn will
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reduce
the number of
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car
owners and prospective
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car
owners.
Also
, encouraging individuals to
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use
public transport by maintaining a
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good
transport system as this
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reduces
traffic on the road.
For instance
, if the railways and undergrounds are in
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good
shape, even the rich will want to
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use
it
thus
reducing the amount of carbon dioxide emitted daily.

Furthermore
, nowadays automobile
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companies
are beginning to invent
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cars
that do not
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use
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fuel
or diesel as
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thier
source of energy
rather
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makes
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use
of solar powered and electricity powered
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cars
. This inventory is major step to save the environment and
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reduce
depletion in the atmosphere.
Secondly
,
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cars
and
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planes
with engines that consume less amount of
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fuel
can
equally
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help
to curb environmental
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pollution
.
Finally
, industries should handle the disposal of waste
properly
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reduce
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pollution
with unhealthy gases in the environment.

In conclusion
, I pen down saying the cost of
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fuel
is not the
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only
measure to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
reduce
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
, as such action will affect the consumer and the economy as a whole. Other measure mentioned above like the
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use
of solar and cell powered
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cars
,
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use
of public transportation can
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help
solve this problem.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay The best way to solve environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. with this statement? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
331 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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