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The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. v.5

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. v. 5
The bar chart illustrate number of hours spent by teacher in primary, lower Secondary And Higher Secondary School in Japan, Spain, Iceland and USA. overall teacher in US spent more hour in all level of school compare to other country' s teacher. Number of teaching hour is also increases with level of class in all countries. In USA, each teacher spent highest almost 1200 hour to teach upper secondary students while Japanese teacher spend only 700 hours to teach upper secondary pupils which is the lowest for in all countries. Instructor of Spain and Iceland also spent significant amount time(approximately 900 hours) to train upper secondary student. Primary and lower secondary school teacher of Japan and Iceland spent nearly 600 hours on schooling. This number is slightly higher for Spain, where a teacher spent almost 650 and 750 hours respectively. On other hand USA, a teacher of primary and lower secondary school spent 750 and 100 hours to teach student which is higher among all countries.
The bar chart illustrate number of
hours
spent
by
teacher
in primary, lower
Secondary
And Higher
Secondary
School
in Japan, Spain, Iceland and USA.

overall
teacher
in US
spent
more
hour
in all level of
school
compare to other
country&
#039; s
teacher
. Number of teaching
hour
is
also
increases with level of
class
in all countries.

In USA
, each
teacher
spent
highest
almost 1200
hour
to teach upper
secondary
students while Japanese
teacher
spend
only
700
hours
to teach upper
secondary
pupils which is the lowest for in all countries. Instructor of Spain and Iceland
also
spent
significant amount time(approximately 900
hours)
to train upper
secondary
student.

Primary and lower
secondary
school
teacher
of Japan and Iceland
spent
nearly
600
hours
on schooling. This number is
slightly
higher for Spain, where a
teacher
spent
almost 650 and 750
hours
respectively
. On other hand USA, a
teacher
of primary and lower
secondary
school
spent
750 and 100
hours
to teach student which is higher among all countries.
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IELTS essay The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
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