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The charts below show the number of working hours per week in industrial sector in four European countries in 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant v.1

The charts below show the number of working hours per week in industrial sector in four European countries in 2002
In Many continents and regions people are staying in a use and throw society, in which different things are being used for a short time and throwing away. This essay will discuss the root causes, including Lack of time, availability of Use and throw products and problems associated with it such as damage to then environment and cost incurred on customers. It has become mandatory for both wife and husband to work to meet the growing needs of luxurious life. Due to which, people are not getting enough time to prepare or do anything which takes relatively high time. More and more firms are manufacturing goods and food items which come with short durability and less costly. For instance, In my family we are more inclined towards buying used and throw items which are widely available in the market because myself and my wife are leading a very busy life. There are several serious problems with this recent trend. Firstly, Short time usage products can cause severe problems to the environment, because it is obvious that such things are made with low quality raw materials. For instance, use and throw plastic toys are made with degraded quality plastic, which will have a severe dent on global ecosystem. Also, with use and throw approach people spend money recursively to busy same item again and again. Since durability of such products is very short, there would be no option to customer other than buying them again. For instance, I spend lots of money everything on use and throw plastic bags. To conclude, "Use and throw away" approach has several problems such as environmental issues, expenditure of customer and root causes for such problems are unavailability of time and accessibility to such products.
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society, in which
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short
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time
and throwing away. This essay will discuss the root causes, including Lack of
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time
, availability of
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and
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throw
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products
and
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problems
associated with it such as damage to then environment and cost incurred on customers.

It has become mandatory for both wife and husband to work to
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meet
the growing needs of luxurious life. Due to which,
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people
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enough
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time
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relatively
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. More and more firms are manufacturing
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goods
and food items which
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come
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durability and less costly.
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items which are
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with this recent trend.
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usage
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products
can cause severe
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problems
to the environment,
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use
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plastic toys
are made
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products
is
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short
, there would be no option to customer other than buying them again.
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use
and
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throw
plastic bags.

To conclude
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approach has several
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problems
such as environmental issues, expenditure of customer and root causes for such
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problems
are unavailability of
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time
and accessibility to such
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products
.
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IELTS essay The charts below show the number of working hours per week in industrial sector in four European countries in 2002

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
290 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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