The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or expe v.16
The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. with this statement? 16
Perception of shopping has been transformed from just being a routine task into an interesting and enjoyable experience. A major chunk of shoppers these days go for shopping just to be entertained. However, this development is not encouraging for the society.
Many young people go to shopping centres, supermarkets, just to see the variety of products and this is totally the wastage of time and they are not paying proper attention to their duties, which leads to give negative impact on their minds. Additionally, as per reports of many agencies, youngsters are purchasing goods, even if they are not necessary to them. They purchase goods, with the purpose of showing their financial capabilities which leads to wastage of money. Moreover, spending a lot of hours at market places without good cause leads to create a nuisance and dispute among the public, customers and shopkeepers.
But, if I talk about positives of shopping, many persons usually go outside for shopping, in group, with their friends or family members, so that they can spend some leisure moments with them, because, in these days, it is hard to get spell from the daily routine. Also, it leads to make their relations stronger, as they will share their thoughts, happiness or even problems with each other.
As per my opinion, those who use shopping as a tool for entertainment are under a risk of social, financial and psychological imbalance. Thus, even though shopping gives benefits to those who are employed in the sector, I think, perceiving shopping as a source of entertainment is indeed harmful.
Perception of
shopping
has
been transformed
from
just
being a routine task into an interesting and enjoyable experience. A major chunk of shoppers these days go for
shopping
just
to
be entertained
.
However
, this development is not encouraging for the society.
Many
young
people
go to
shopping
centres
, supermarkets,
just
to
see
the variety of products and this is
totally
the wastage of
time and
they are not paying proper attention to their duties, which leads to give
negative
impact on their minds.
Additionally
, as per reports of
many
agencies, youngsters are purchasing
goods
, even if they are not necessary to them. They
purchase
goods
, with the purpose of showing their financial capabilities which leads to wastage of money.
Moreover
, spending
a lot of
hours at market places without
good
cause leads to create a nuisance and dispute among the public, customers and shopkeepers.
But
, if I talk about positives of
shopping
,
many
persons
usually
go outside for
shopping
, in group, with their friends or family members,
so
that they can spend
some
leisure moments with them,
because
, in these days, it is
hard
to
get
spell from the daily routine.
Also
, it leads to
make
their relations stronger, as they will share their thoughts, happiness or even problems with each other.
As per my opinion, those who
use
shopping
as a tool for entertainment are under a
risk
of social, financial and psychological imbalance.
Thus
,
even though
shopping
gives benefits to those who
are employed
in the sector, I
think
, perceiving
shopping
as a source of entertainment is
indeed
harmful.
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